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全国国际商务英语考试(二级)
Listening to and Writing
in Business English
YU Hongliang
Yangzhou Univ.
[email protected]
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Overview: The need for skills training
Test-takers need to know how to conduct
their business in English
 They are most likely to be doing this with
other non-native speakers of English
because of:
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Increased diversity in the workplace
Explosion of multi-nationals
Increase in use of multi-skilled teams
Ever-evolving degrees of responsibility
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Soft skills in business English
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Soft skills are often the “deal breaker” in business:
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delegating
listening
presenting (of self – interviews –or of business)
negotiating
problem-solving
contributing effectively to
meetings/seminars/debates
social interaction – networking
Soft skills framework allows emphasis on
interpersonal forces of language-use in a work
context
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Part I: Listening to business
English
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Problems in common
Anything special in BE listening?
What to be assessed in BE listening?
Test structure
Sample analysis
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Problems in common
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Common: Good feel but failed
Challenging: content, speed, accent,
information processing
 What: General vs specific
 How: Working memory training; input
frequency effect; multimodal
trigger/prompt; note-taking skills
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Anything special in BE
listening?
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Doing business in English
Contextually-loaded
 Culturally-loaded
 Content-based
 Strategy-based
 Information accuracy required
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What to be assessed in BE
listening?
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能够听懂语速为150词/分钟左右、句子结构比
较复杂的商务材料
能掌握其要点和相关细节,通过分析和推理领
会说话人的态度、感情和真实意图,能做简单
笔记。
内容涉及招聘面试、组织会议、旅程安排、工
作计划、工作报告、产品广告、使用说明、业
务洽谈(如价格谈判、订购货物、货物运送、
支付方式等)、投诉处理、演讲等商务会话
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Structure
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Matching
Gap filling
Multiple Choice
Total question items: 20
Time limit: 35 min.
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Sample analysis (I)
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Text type: Monologue/One-part turn of
conversation
 Test format: Matching based on a chart
or a table
 What to be assessed: Information in
general (e.g. what the speaker says; the
intent of the speaker)
 Difficulty: The monologue too short to
be able to respond to
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Sample analysis (II)
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Text type: Dialogues/small talk
 Test format: Gap filling based on a
chart or a table
 What to be assessed: Tracking specific
(missing) information in business
context
 Difficulty: Note-taking skills required;
answers indeterminate somehow and
sometimes
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Sample analysis (III)
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Text type: Short
conversations/passage
 Test format: Usual multiple-choice
questions
 What to be assessed: general
comprehension in business
context
 Difficulty: Linguistic competence;
Listening while reading; No time
allowed for note-taking
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Part II: Writing in business
English
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Problems in common
Anything special in BE writing?
What to be assessed in BE writing?
Scoring operationalized criteria
Sample analysis
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Problems in common
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Common: Good at linguistic forms but
pragmatically failed
Challenging: Highly contextualized,
unfamiliarity with topics
 What: Prompted by variety of genres
and multimodal discourse
 How: Established schemata for
business writings; Memorize good
patterns of sentences and prototypes of
business writings
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Anything special in BE writing?
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Pragmatically appropriate
Contextually-loaded
 Culturally-loaded
 Situation-based
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Different from ordinary writings
Special topics with multimodal triggers
 Special wording and expressions
 Special formats
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What to be assessed in BE
writing?
目标:能够完成商务信函、电子邮
件、经贸文章摘要、简单商务报告、
计划书、合同等写作任务
 要求:结构清楚、内容准确、重点
突出,逻辑性强。
 写作速度:300词/60分钟
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Scoring operationalized criteria
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General requirements
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满分为20分。
总体要求: 内容和形式
具体要求:内容是否贴切、结构是否完整、格式是
否正确、书写是否规范、风格是否得体、词汇语法
使用是否准确。
评分标准:分A、B、C、D四个等次,各等次区间为
5分,即:A(16~20分);B(11~15分);C(6~10
分);D(1~5分)。
白卷、作文与题目毫不相关或只言片语表达不清的,
不给分。
计分只按整分计算。
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Key words
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信息传递/写作目标的有效性
内容的充实与逻辑性
语言使用的得体性
词汇语法的准确性(商务术语)
结构的完整性
格式的规范性
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Sample analysis
Letter writing
 Report writing
 Chart writing
 Summary writing
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Sample analysis –Letter writing
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Sample writing (Sample 1.1)
Sample for observation
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Guided writing
 Practice writing
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Sample analysis –Report writing
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Sample writing (Sample 1.2)
Sample for observation
 Sample analysis
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Guided writing
 Practice writing
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Sample analysis –Chart writing
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Sample writing (Sample 1.3)
Sample for observation
 Sample analysis
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Guided writing
Bar chart
 Line chart
 Pie chart
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Practice writing
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Sample analysis –Summary
writing
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Sample writing (Sample 1.4)
Sample for observation
 Sample analysis
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Guided writing
 Practice writing
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More about summary writing
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A summary is a shortened passage, which
retains the essential information of the
original.
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It is a fairly brief restatement --- in your own
words ---of the contents of a passage.
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Note: you simply report back what the writer
has said, without making value judgments.
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Characteristics of a good summary
Can be understood without reference to the
original;
 Is a faithful reproduction of, or contains only the
ideas or information of, the original;
 Is brief without any unnecessary detail;
 Is a readable unified whole
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Techniques in summary writing
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Paraphrasing
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To paraphrase means to completely and
correctly express other people’s ideas in
one’s own words.
You’ve cooked us all a hot potato. (a
troublesome person or issue)
Prevention is better than cure. (It is
better to prevent something unpleasant
from happening than try to put it right
afterwards.)
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The importance of paraphrasing
It helps us understand the original better.
 It helps us grasp the central idea and the
main points.
 It helps us write summaries that are brief
and to the point, and in our own words.
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Steps of paraphrasing
Read the original carefully and
comprehend its meaning wholly and
correctly.
 Consider the original article as a whole,
not in isolated sentences.
 Grasping the central ideas.
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Ways of condensation
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Use synonyms or synonymous phrases:
He had a good command of English.
(He knew English well.)
Change the complexities into simple
sentences: My brother has an
appreciation of modern art. (My
brother appreciates modern art.)
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Turn complex sentences into simple
sentences: He received a welcome that
was as cold as ice. (He received an icy
welcome.)
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Combine the sentences: Hurry up. If you
don’t, you’ll miss the train. (Hurry up or
you’ll miss the train.)
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Finding the topic sentence and making an
outline: topic sentence / outline
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How to write a summary?
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Necessary elements for a good summary
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Thesis statement
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Proper citation: title, author, source; date of
publication and the text (journal articles)
The topic or general subject matter of the text;
the author’s major assertion, comment, or position
on the topic
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Supporting ideas
 major supporting ideas;
 relationships among these ideas;
 no specifics;
 the author’s purpose in writing;
 no personal opinions, ideas, and inferences.
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Grammar and the structure of writing
avoid direct quotation;
 use transitional words.
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Length: 1/4 to 1/3 of the original
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Steps in writing a summary
Read the article
 To understand the article and find the
general theme.
 Reread the article
 Divide into sections and label each
section.
 Understand the important parts.
 Write one-sentence summaries
 Summarize each section of thought.
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Formulate the thesis statement
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Write the first draft
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Weave the one-sentence section-summaries
together.
In the first sentence or two:
The author’s name
The article’s or chapter’s name
The author’s thesis statement
Then the summary sentences for each
paragraph or section.
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Express in your own words, to avoid
plagiarism.
 Occasional supporting ideas if necessary.
 Note:
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Eliminate unnecessary words and
repetitions.
Eliminate personal ideas and inferences.
Use transitions for a smooth and logical
flow of ideas.
Conclude with a ‘summing up’ sentence.
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Edit the draft
Is all the important information in the summary?
 Am I listing things out?
 Am I saying the same thing over and over again?
 Have I left out my personal views and ideas?
 Does my summary ‘hang together’?
 Is my grammar, punctuation, and spelling
correct?
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Write the final draft
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Thank you!
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