Transcript Concluding Sentences
Concluding Sentences: Do's and Don'ts
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A concluding sentence does more than wrap up what you have said in your paragraph:
it summarize ideas it transitions to the next paragraph it demonstrates the importance of your topic idea
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Think of your paragraph like a hamburger:
The top bun is the
topic sentence
The middle ingredients are the
supporting sentences
The bottom bun is the
concluding sentence
The buns hold everything together and resemble each other, just as the topic and concluding sentences should.
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Do's
Do
stick to the main points. •
Do
allow for a smooth transition between the concluding sentence and the topic sentence of the next paragraph. For example: o Concluding sentence
"For these reasons, sea level rise is a climate change impact."
o Topic sentence in following paragraph
key stressor from climate change is extreme weather." "Another
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More Do's
Do
focus and be specific about how your supporting sentences contribute to the concluding sentence.
Do
arrange the body of the paragraph in a sequence that flows to lead up to the concluding sentence.
Do
make sure that a concluding sentence is necessary for your paragraph, as some short paragraphs may not require one.
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Don'ts
Don't
simply rephrase your topic sentence ; redundant .
that would be
Don't
like begin with an unnecessary, overused phrase
"in conclusion", "in summary", "in closing",
or "as shown in the essay." (These may work in
speeches, but they come across as wooden and trite in writing.
)
Sometimes all you need are a few well chosen words to sum up the main idea you have developed.
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