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二 轮复习：书面表达（一）
—— 图画类
Check Ss’ homework:
1. 背诵一篇表格类书面表达
Check Ss’ homework:
下图是一幅与当前交通状况有关的漫画，请根据漫画内容
进行描述。
注意：1.不少于150字；
提示词：蜗牛 snail
审题：
学生作文展示及讲评：
两只蜗牛中一只说 “Look! They are
moving more slowly than us” 两只蜗牛取
笑路上拥挤的汽车比它们还要跑得慢。
推断：交通拥挤问题的严重性。
From the picture we can see two snails
are joking about the cars on the crowded
roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to
amuse us. It actually shows us one of the
most serious problems. As we all know, the
issue of heavy traffic has long been a
problem.
分析原因：
1. 随着经济发展，私家车增加；
2. 随着汽车增加和城市人口增加，一些道
路等交通设施仍没有改善.
3 行人交通意识淡薄等。
But why does this happen? I think several
factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly,
the number of private cars keeps growing every
day. Secondly, with a large number of population
and numbers of cars increasing, some roads still
remain unimproved. Thirdly, some people’s lack of
awareness of traffic regulation also results in traffic
jam.
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围绕分析的原因，提出解决问题的看法。
To solve the problem, some pieces of
advice are put forward. I suggest that
more streets and roads should be built.
Besides, we should take some measures
to limit the number of cars. This can
decrease the traffic flow.
参考范文:
As is shown in the picture, two snails are joking about
the cars on the crowded roads. This humorous picture
isn’t just to amuse us. It actually shows us one of the
most serious problems. As we all know, the issue of
heavy traffic has long been a problem.
But why does this happen? I think several factors
contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, the number of
private cars keeps growing every day. Secondly, with a
large number of population and numbers of cars
increasing, some roads still remain unimproved. Thirdly,
some people’s lack of awareness of traffic regulation also
results in traffic jam.
To solve the problem, some pieces of advice are put
forward. I suggest that more streets and roads should
be built. Besides, we should take some measures to limit
the number of cars. Only with our combined efforts can
we speed up the flow of traffic in the cities.
1.
技
高级词汇、短语的应用
2. 丰富的句式，恰当的连接词
巧
3.
巧用谚语
• 句式方面：
1. 主从复合句的使用：
定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句的应用。
2. 倒装句，强调句等。
3.非谓语动词的使用
[典型例句]
1.(1) China is the third largest country
in the world.
(2)Everyone knows it.
用定语从句合并：
As everyone knows, China is the third
largest country in the world.
用宾语从句合并：
Everyone knows （that）China is the
third largest country in the world.
2. (1) It was raining hard.
(2) We kept on working.
用状语从句合并：
Although it was raining hard, we
kept on working.
谚语运用举例：
1. So if you want to learn English well,
work harder. Just as the proverb
says, “ no pains, no gains
”.
如果你想学好英语, 勤奋些, 正如谚语
所说 “不劳无获”。
Practice time：
divide the students into 3 groups
and ask them to finish their task by
discussing.
参考范文：
As is vividly shown in the picture, occupied in chatting
on the Internet, a boy refuses to talk with his mother. The
mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy,
depressed.
It is the reflection of communication between parents
and children. Several reasons contribute to it. First, the
Internet provides us with a place where we can
communicate with different people, in which case children
are addicted to virtual world and keep distance from people
around . Besides, pressure from study drive them to seek
excitement on the Internet. In addition, parents, busy with
their work, spare little time with their children.
As far as I am concerned, children should cut back on
the time that they spend on computer. On the other hand,
parents should exchange their ideas and feelings, treating
them as friends. Still, they may find some interesting topics
that both parents and teenagers love to talk about.
Rome wasn’t built in a day.
Just as the saying goes, “practice
makes perfect ” The more you read，
accumulate and practise，the better
your writing will be！