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Basic Writing-Character Introduction 杨琨 南昌外国语学校 Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things. 分词结构 • ① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 同位语 身份与 性格 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 V-ing做状语 ②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age 定语从句 of 3. 时间状语 ③ When Jay's first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. ④ His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to receive many awards for his songs. 经历 尽量用复合句,倒装,定语从句等，润色文章 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组 ⑤ His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things. 评价 总结： 1.尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁， 通顺。 2.尽量用复合句,倒装,定语从句等，润色文章。 3.注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组。 一、用英语介绍美国当选总统巴拉克.奥巴马 姓名 巴拉克·奥巴马 （ Barack Obama ） 出生时间 出生地点 1961年8 月4 日 家庭 小时梦想 教育 父亲是肯尼亚(Kenya)黑人，母亲是美国白人 当总统 1988考入哈佛法学院(Harvard Law School),1991年获博士学位 毕业后当律师、大学讲师，后来从政。2008 年11用4日，在大选（ the general election ） 中击败麦凯恩（John McCain ），成为首位 黑人(African American)总统。 职业 夏威夷(Hawaii) 将下列要点分别翻译成句子. 1.巴拉克·奥巴马出生于1961年8月4日. Barack Obama was born on August 4th, 1961. 2.他出生于夏威夷. He was born in Hawaii. 3.他父亲是肯尼亚黑人,母亲是美国白人 He is the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother. 4.小时候的梦想是当美国总统. When he was a small boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States. 5.1988年他考入哈佛(Harvard)法学院. He was admitted to Harvard Law School in 1988. 6.1991年他获得博士学位. He gained his doctor’s degree in 1991. 7.毕业后当律师,大学讲师(lecturer),后来从政. After graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. 8.2008年11月4日,在大选中(the general election)中击败麦凯恩(John McCain),成为首 位黑人总统(African American President of the United States). On November 4,2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election ,making him the first African American President of the United States. 1.Barack Obama was born on August 4th, 1961. 2. He was born in Hawaii. 3. He is the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother. 4.When he was a small boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States. 5. He was admitted to Harvard Law School in 1988. 6. He gained his doctor’s degree in 1991. 7. After graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. 8. On November 4,2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election ,making him the first African American President of the United States. 合并句子.根据内容连贯,语篇衔接的原则,运用恰 当的关联词,将各句整成一篇短文. 1,2,3 4 5,6 7, 8 Barack Obama, the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. When he was only a small boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States. In 1988, he was admitted to Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991. After graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election, making him the first African American President of the United States. Thanks