Transcript Week 8: 10/23 Answering the Opposition, They Say I Say Ch. 6, and Midterm

Answering the Opposition
Planting a Naysayer in Your Text Ch. 6
of They Say / I Say
• No argument occurs in a vacuum. Everyone
comes to most topics with some already
formed opinions or ideas in the back of their
minds. Your job as a persuasive writer is to
anticipate the most common of those ideas
and to refute them.
• Refute: to prove false or erroneous (mistaken).
Prove a person to be in error.
Example of an Answer to the
Opposition:
• In Chapter 6 of They Say, I Say, the authors use Kim Chernin’s
book about women and the pressure to be thin.
• Chernin’s claim: The pressure to be thin is harmful to women.
• The naysayer/opposition’s argument (p. 80): Losing weight helps
her feel better about herself, have more confidence. (So… this
pressure to be thin is not so harmful.)
• Chernin’s answer to the opposition (p. 88): A vast percentage of
women who lose weight gain it back and then some, making the
gain in self-confidence temporary and putting women in a worse
position than they were in to begin with.
• By including a naysayer (an opposing view) in her argument and
answering it, Chernin strengthens her original stance.
When Answering an Opposing
Argument…
• Be fair. Summarize the opposing argument in a
way that someone who holds it would
recognize and agree with.
• Avoid making unkind judgments about the
people who hold the opposing opinion.
• Make sure that your answer (refutation) of the
opposing argument is strong and relevant.
(Don’t just dismiss the opposing argument
with “that doesn’t matter.)
Planting a Naysayer, Cont.
• Remember, the purpose of planting a Naysayer in
your essay is to show that you are aware of the
other side’s argument, aware that not everyone is
going to agree with you immediately, and that
you have an answer for those arguments or
objections.
• This means that you need to make sure that your
argument is stronger for having included the
naysayer because you have answered the
opposition.
Answering the Opposition in Essay #2
• Have you run across any articles/opinions about your claim that
differ from yours?
• How might you answer those differing opinions? Do you have
good reasons that you agree with one point of view and not the
other?
• Are there places in your essay where your argument would be
strengthened by inserting a naysayer into your text and then
answering the naysayer’s points?
• If you have already included a naysayer in your essay, reread that
section and make necessary changes.
• If you have not already included a naysayer, write a brief
paragraph where you do so using the source I asked you to bring
with you for today.
Peer Response to Naysayer Practice
• Can you identify the claim?
• Is the naysayers position fairly, rationally
explained? Or is the naysayer a “straw man”?
• Is the response to the naysayer strong? Is the
claim stronger for having included the
naysayer?