雅思句型

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雅思小作文句型
雅思图表作文的本质:
对比对照(比较结构句型)
趋势描述(上升,下降)
• 上升的动词:increase, rise, surge,
enlarge, swell, soar, enhance,
climb, jump, augment, go up
• 下降的动词:decrease, descend,
decline, drop, shrink, diminish,
dwindle, taper
• 形容词的副词:considerably,
sharply, remarkably, dramatically,
greatly, drastically, extremely,
steadily, substantially, continually,
continuously, moderately,
respectively, generally, slightly,
mainly, strikingly
句型的变化:
• 请翻译:
• 1940年到1985年,瑞典的老年人比例
从大约7%显著增加到13%,美国的从
9%明显增加到15%。
Sweden,remarkably/dramatically
• Increase/surge/go up
句型变化
• 1.主体做主语+increase
• Between 1940 and 1985 the
proportion of the elderly people
increased remarkably from about
17% in Sweden and 9% in the
USA to 13% and 15%
respectively.
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2.年代做主语+saw+increase
The period from 1940 to 1985 saw a
generally steady increase in the
proportion of ….
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3.地点做主语 + experienced + increase
Both the USA and Sweden experience
an alarming surge/increase in the
proportion of…..
• 写作时首段应是命题的改写
• 主体段应描写大的特征或大趋势的概括
(关键数据支持)
• 关键数据及起点终点坐标,最小最大值,
偶尔会用交点坐标,部分特征拐点坐标。
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得分注意点:
句子的衔接和句子结构的变化
分词和比较结构的使用
从句的使用
整篇文章万万不可主观推理分析,否则扣
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首段是信息段,不能照抄命题,只能改写命题,概括主要的研究内容,研究
对象,时间和地点。如果是两个图,必须分开来写,句型常用
while…..shows…..,….illustrate…
For example:
(首段)The three lines in the chart each show the changes in the proportion
of the elderly people to the population of the USA , Sweden and Japan from
1940 till today . Also the chart gives predicted date for the trends.
(主体段)Since 1940 , the proportion in the USA has been slightly higher
than that in Sweden at any given time, while that in Japan was always the
smallest . Specially, the figures for the three countries in 1940 were
9%,7%,5% respectively. The changes in the proportion in the USA and
Sweden are featured mainly by steady increase although since 1980 the
USA experienced somewhat declines. By contrast , Japan did not see
increase substantially , sending it to a peak of 5% in 2007,the same as in
1940. According to the prediction since 2000, the upward trends will have
been obvious in the three countries , but in Japan will soar at the fastest
speed .Till/By 2040 the figure will have reached 27% , compared with 25%
in the USA and 23% in Sweden.
• 说明文注重语言的流畅,简洁。在图表作
文中,不追求词藻的华丽,只追求表达的
清楚。
• 注意点:
– 没有必要写出每条信息,要辨别关键特征
– 段落划分要合理(得分点)
– 衔接和过渡词很重要
• 一整篇文章的例子:剑五P75
• To be located in the town centre, S2 is in the town centre, a nontraffic zone . As result, it is only accessible by the railway whereas
the main roads are unavailable. Moreover, it is hemmed out the
houses, meaning it’s convenient for the dwellers to do some
shopping. In addition, it is closer to the south industry but far away
from the north.
• Unlike S2, S1 will be set in the countryside, where both the railway
and main roads are ready . But the 44000 people from Bransdon
and Crandson find it not easy to reach S1, although it is connected
by the railway with Crandson. Furthermore, this site is far away from
the industry areas. However, it is convenient for those who live in
Hindo.
• To sum up , the two sites are different in many aspects/ways.