Transcript 雅思句型
LOGO 雅思小作文句型 雅思图表作文的本质: 对比对照(比较结构句型) 趋势描述(上升,下降) • 上升的动词:increase, rise, surge, enlarge, swell, soar, enhance, climb, jump, augment, go up • 下降的动词:decrease, descend, decline, drop, shrink, diminish, dwindle, taper • 形容词的副词:considerably, sharply, remarkably, dramatically, greatly, drastically, extremely, steadily, substantially, continually, continuously, moderately, respectively, generally, slightly, mainly, strikingly 句型的变化: • 请翻译: • 1940年到1985年,瑞典的老年人比例 从大约7%显著增加到13%,美国的从 9%明显增加到15%。 Sweden,remarkably/dramatically • Increase/surge/go up 句型变化 • 1.主体做主语+increase • Between 1940 and 1985 the proportion of the elderly people increased remarkably from about 17% in Sweden and 9% in the USA to 13% and 15% respectively. • • 2.年代做主语+saw+increase The period from 1940 to 1985 saw a generally steady increase in the proportion of …. • • 3.地点做主语 + experienced + increase Both the USA and Sweden experience an alarming surge/increase in the proportion of….. • 写作时首段应是命题的改写 • 主体段应描写大的特征或大趋势的概括 (关键数据支持) • 关键数据及起点终点坐标,最小最大值, 偶尔会用交点坐标,部分特征拐点坐标。 • • • • • 得分注意点: 句子的衔接和句子结构的变化 分词和比较结构的使用 从句的使用 整篇文章万万不可主观推理分析,否则扣 分 • • • • 首段是信息段,不能照抄命题,只能改写命题,概括主要的研究内容,研究 对象,时间和地点。如果是两个图,必须分开来写,句型常用 while…..shows…..,….illustrate… For example: (首段)The three lines in the chart each show the changes in the proportion of the elderly people to the population of the USA , Sweden and Japan from 1940 till today . Also the chart gives predicted date for the trends. (主体段)Since 1940 , the proportion in the USA has been slightly higher than that in Sweden at any given time, while that in Japan was always the smallest . Specially, the figures for the three countries in 1940 were 9%,7%,5% respectively. The changes in the proportion in the USA and Sweden are featured mainly by steady increase although since 1980 the USA experienced somewhat declines. By contrast , Japan did not see increase substantially , sending it to a peak of 5% in 2007,the same as in 1940. According to the prediction since 2000, the upward trends will have been obvious in the three countries , but in Japan will soar at the fastest speed .Till/By 2040 the figure will have reached 27% , compared with 25% in the USA and 23% in Sweden. • 说明文注重语言的流畅,简洁。在图表作 文中,不追求词藻的华丽,只追求表达的 清楚。 • 注意点: – 没有必要写出每条信息,要辨别关键特征 – 段落划分要合理(得分点) – 衔接和过渡词很重要 • 一整篇文章的例子:剑五P75 • To be located in the town centre, S2 is in the town centre, a nontraffic zone . As result, it is only accessible by the railway whereas the main roads are unavailable. Moreover, it is hemmed out the houses, meaning it’s convenient for the dwellers to do some shopping. In addition, it is closer to the south industry but far away from the north. • Unlike S2, S1 will be set in the countryside, where both the railway and main roads are ready . But the 44000 people from Bransdon and Crandson find it not easy to reach S1, although it is connected by the railway with Crandson. Furthermore, this site is far away from the industry areas. However, it is convenient for those who live in Hindo. • To sum up , the two sites are different in many aspects/ways.