Transcript 初三英语（叶榭罗亚娟）.ppt

Writing
Class 3 Grade 9
Yexie School
clever girl.
Wendy is a _____
• She thinks some of the school work is too
simple for her.
• She usually achieves A grades in all her
subjects.
• She never fails an exam.
Topic sentence(主题句)
structure
a sentence to tell the
reader what the paragraph
is mainly about.
(让读者知道所写段落主要谈论什么)
Supporting sentences(扩展句/
支撑句)
sentences to give more detailed（详细）
information about the topic
sentence(说明或铺叙该段落的主题思想。)
Find the topic sentence
• She is helpful.
• Other students often ask her to assist
them.
Choose the topic sentence
Her dad is the manager of the company.
Her mum is responsible for sales.
Her brother is the accountant.
Every morning they discuss the business over
breakfast.
She has a family business.
She has a colourful school life.
Find the Supporting sentences
a. Her dad is the manager of the company.
b. She always goes to school in her family car.
c. She has written several successful computer games.
d. Her mum is responsible for sales.
e. She usually achieves A grades in all her subjects.
f. Her brother is the accountant.
TS: Wendy’s family
help her a lot on her
business .
1.
a
3.
f
2.
d
Find the Supporting sentences
a. On Fridays she has Computer Club meetings.
b. She seldom goes to bed before 11:30pm.
c. On Mondays and Thursdays she plays basketball.
d. She gets up at six every morning.
e. Once a week she has violin lessons.
TS: After school she
usually attends a club.
1.
a
3.
e
2.
c
Wendy is a hard-working girl.
Think and choose
Supporting sentences (examples and explanations)
1. Every afternoon, he leaves the classroom until
very late and closes all the windows of the
classroom.
2. He usually cleans the blackboard for his
classmates when they are busy.
不写和主题句无关的句子
3. He
never tells lies.
4. My classmate WangLei is a warm-hearted boy.
Topic sentence
TS
Write the topic sentence
Tom
is a helpful /warm-hearted boy
____________________________________.
Tom always helps his classmates with
their studies. When his classmates have
some problems with their homework, they
will ask him. And he is always willing to
help them.
Write the supporting sentences.
TS:Damin is very strong.
__________________________________
He is over 65 now but still works every
__________________________________
day. He can control his raft in the river
although he is an elderly man.
__________________________________
TS_______is
a hard-working
studentstudent
in our
TS:JiangWenying
is a hard-working
class.
in our class. She always gets up early to read
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________.
____________________________________________________________________.
books. After class, she is still busy solving her
maths problems when others are having a rest.
Write about 60 words on the topic "The
Person I Admire Most"
Writing Time
1. Who is the person you admire (佩服)most?
2. Why do you admire him/her most? (give at least 2
reasons)
Person (人称):
he / she
Tense（时态）: 一般现在时
Key points (要点）: Why？ Two reasons
1. 请注意supporting sentences 要和topic
sentence 有关联(不写无关句子)
2. 第三人称后面的动词+s,es
Conclusion:
1.写主题句和它的扩展句
2.用checklist帮助同伴互评
3.下一节课将学习如何对这篇文
章进行遣词造句。
Homework
Rewrite your composition
according to the checklist.
Practice makes perfect!
The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is our Chinese
teacher, Mr Pan.
① He is a very responsible teacher. He comes
to school at 6:30 every morning to check
students’ homework. Some students in our class
fall behind others, he will encourage them to
work hard.
② He is also a lovely teacher. His Chinese
class is very interesting. I always hear you laugh
happily in his lesson.
He sets a good example for me. I will learn
from him.