Transcript Slide 1

Day 1
"Chee’s Daughter" a story set in the southwest was written by two woman.
Each member of Chee’s family showed their love and concern for Chee’s
daughter.
Formation of irregular plural noun
Use of commas to set off appositive
Pronoun agreement with antecedent
Capitalization of name of geographic area
Day 1
“Chee’s Daughter,” a story set in the Southwest, was written by two
women.
Use of commas to set off appositive
Capitalization of name of geographic area
Formation of irregular plural noun
Each member of Chee’s family showed his or her love and concern
for Chee’s daughter.
Pronoun agreement with antecedent
Day 2
Sobs catching in her throat Chee’s sister ran out of the hogan.
Chee felt badly, because he suspected something had happened to
his daughter.
Use of comma to set off absolute phrase
Use of predicate adjective after linking verb
Elimination of unnecessary comma before subordinate clause
Day 2
Sobs catching in her throat, Chee’s sister ran out of the hogan.
Use of comma to set off absolute phrase
,
Chee felt bad because he suspected that something had happened to his daughter.
Use of predicate adjective after linking verb
Elimination of unnecessary comma before subordinate clause
Day 3
Because Chee’s wife had died, his wife’s parents come to get his daughter.
Its the navajo belief that a girl child belongs to her mother’s people.
Use of correct verb tense
Correction of commonly confused words
Capitalization of nationality
Day 3
Because Chee’s wife had died, his wife’s parents came to get his daughter.
Use of correct verb tense
It’s the Navajo belief that a girl child belongs to her mother’s people.
Correction of commonly confused words
Capitalization of nationality
Day 4
The relationship between Chee and his wife’s people were never well.
After losing his child. Chee thought about taking a job in town.
Use of predicate adjective after linking verb
Correction of sentence fragment
Subject and verb agreement
Day 4
The relationship between Chee and his wife’s people was never good.
Subject and verb agreement
Use of predicate adjective after linking verb
After losing his child, Chee thought about taking a job in town.
Correction of sentence fragment
Day 5
Chee brought the following to Old Fat Man, vegetables, coffee, meat, and
dryed fruit.
As he rode with his daughter, Chee began to reverently sing a song.
Elimination of split infinitive
Correct spelling: base word with final y
Correct use of colon before a list
Day 5
Chee brought the following to Old Fat Man: vegetables, coffee, meat, and
dried fruit.
Correct use of colon before a list
Correct spelling: base word with final y
As he rode home with his daughter, Chee began to sing a song reverently.
Elimination of split infinitive