Transcript Слайд 1 - Kanevskaya

Личное письмо
Базовый
уровень
Personal
Letter
Учитель
английского
языка
МОУ СОШ
№2
Василишина
М.В.
Личное письмо
Personal Letter
• Пишут знакомым, друзьям,
родственникам
• Рассказывают последние новости,
личные проблемы
• Запрашивают нужную информацию,
совет
• Разговорный (неофициальный) стиль
Личное письмо
Personal Letter
Адрес/
дата
Приветствие/ обращение
Вступление
(Opening remarks)
Основная часть
Заключение
Личная подпись
(Signature)
(Greeting)
(Main body)
(Closing remarks)
You have received a letter from your English-speaking
friend Mary who writes
I'd love to know more about your home town. Where is it
and how many people live there? What is there in your
town?
I have to stop now because I'm going to meet my best
friend.
We
spend
every
afternoon
together...
Write a letter to Mary, who has just moved to a new house.
In your letter:
- Tell her about your home town;
- Ask three questions about her best friend.
Write 100-140 words. Remember the rules of writing.
44, Vokzalnaya Street,
Kanevskaya Russia
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your letter.
(Greeting)
31st January 2011
(Opening remarks)
First of all, I hope you will be very happy in your new house. I look
forward to hearing all about it.
My home town is in the South of Russia. It is quite a small town and about ten
thousand people live there. The town has three schools, a station and different
kinds of shops. There are lots of things to do in my town. You can go to the
swimming pool or the cinema, or you can walk in the beautiful park in the centre of
the town. There are also several cafes and restaurants.
Tell me more about your best friend. What does she look like? What is she like? Do
you have a lot in common?
Write back soon
Best wishes,
Lena
(Closing remarks)
Адрес
• В правом верхнем углу
• Порядок написания:
• номер квартиры/ дома, улица, район, город,
индекс, страна
• 7, 44, Vokzalnaya Street, Krasnodar Region,
Kanevskaya, 353730, Russia/ Russian Federation
• Дата: день/ месяц/ год
• 31.01.2011 или 31st January 2011
Свой адрес, а не друга
При проверке цифра – одно слово
• Приветствие/
обращение
(Greeting)
• Dear
• Hi/ Hello
• Hey Tom
• Вступление
(Opening remarks)
• Как дела?
• Как здоровье
• Ссылка на полученное
письмо
• How are you?
• It was great to get your
letter!
• I’m glad you’re OK
Сокращения it’s/ I’ve/ you’re
при проверке – одно слово
Основная часть (Main body)
• Детально раскрывается цель письма и
даются ответы адресату на заданные в
письме вопросы.
• Каждая новая тема - с нового абзаца.
• Абзацев – не менее 3-х.
• Последний абзац- 3 вопроса адресату
согласно заданию.
Вопросы должны быть развернутые,
желательно разных типов
• Заключение
(Closing remarks)
• Завершающие фразы
• I’m looking forward to
hearing from you
• Looking forward to your
reply (to your next letter)
• Please, write soon and tell
me
• Личная подпись
(Signature)
• Love
• Best wishes
• + свое имя
Личная подпись и имя в
левом нижнем углу, на
разных строчках
Список полезных слов и
выражений
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Вступление (Opening remarks)
Thanks for your letter
I was happy/ glad to get/ receive your letter
I was sorry to hear that…(you’re sick)
Sorry I didn’t write earlier/ Sorry I’ve taken so
long to reply, but…
•
Нейтральные фразы: Sorry it took me so
long to write, but I have been very busy at
school. It was great to get your letter!
Основная часть (Main body)
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Ответы на вопросы друга по переписке:
As for me…/ I personally think
You asked me about…/ You wanted to know if…
Предложения-связки перед вопросами другу:
(Now) tell me about your…/ Tell me more about
You mentioned …(taking music lessons)
You wrote you had.. (watched a new film)
Заключение (Closing remarks)
• Нейтральная фраза: Write (back) soon
Личная подпись (Signature)
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Yours
Love/ With love/ lots of love
Best/ Warm wishes
Нейтральная фраза: Best wishes
Пример задания с
You have received
a letter from your English-speaking
friend Sam
развернутым
ответом
who writes:
1. Winter is great here! It’s very cold, but when it snows,
everything looks so beautiful! Sometimes it starts snowing in
September. In winter I go skiing as often as I can. I think it’s fun!
Sometimes my friends and I go skating. 2. What’s winter like in
your place? What activities do you do in this season? Do you like
winter or not?
3. Last week I bought a new mp3-player…
Write a letter to Sam.
In your letter:
- answer his questions;
- Ask three questions about his new mp3-player.
Write 100-140 words. Remember the rules of writing
Подсчет количества слов и исправления на
черновике!
• Не приступайте к написанию письма сразу на
бланке!
127, Kropotkin
Street,
Novosibirsk,
834576 Russian
Federation
12th October 2010
Dear Sam ,
Thank you very much for your letter! I was really glad to hear from
you! You know that I live in Novosibirsk, in the centre of my
country. Winters here are usually severe with the temperature
going down to 35 degrees below zero! With such temperature
outside, I usually try spending my time at home, or visit my friends.
Sometimes, when it is warmer, we go sledging and skiing. There is
a big skating rink in the central park, so we go skating, too! I
should say that I don’t like winters very mush because of cold. I
think that if we had warmer winters, I would like this season more.
Now tell me, please, about your new mp3-player!
You know that I love electronic devices! What’s the brand? How
much memory does it have? Can you watch video files on it?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes,
Ilya.
! 164 слова, допустимо отклонение на 10%, т.е. 150 слов
Если объем письма большой:
• 1. Краткий адрес, дата цифрами
• 2. Полные формы сократить: do not = don’t;
• 3. Эмоционально окрашенные слова можно безболезненно
опустить:
• I was very much excited - I was excited
• 4. Длинные фразы заменить на более короткие синонимы
• a lot of - lots of/ many/ much
• How much time does it take you..? - How much does it take you...?
• Best wishes – Best
• I’m looking forward to hearing from you- Please, write soon
• Have you ever been to a foreign country? - Have you ever been
abroad?
• 5. Опустить фразы, не влияющие на смысл письма
• Thank you very much for your letter! I was really glad to hear from
you! –
• Thank you very much for your letter!
127, Kropotkin
Street,
Novosibirsk,
834576 Russian
Federation
12th October 2010
12. 10. 2010
Dear Sam ,
Thank you very much =Thanks for your letter! I was really glad to
hear from you! You know that I live in Novosibirsk, in the centre of my
country = Russia. Winters here are usually severe with the temperature
going down to 35 degreesWhat’s
below zero!
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outside, I
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in temperature
your place?
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had
warmer winters, I would like this season more.
Do you
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Now tell me, please, about your new Вопрос
mp3-player!
You know that I
love electronic devices! What’s the brand? How much memory does it
have? Can you watch video files= videos on it? Вопрос 3 Вопрос 2
I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes,
Ilya.
! 164 слова, после сокращений – 139 слов. Главное, чтобы письмо не
потеряло смысл и не были нарушены требования.
Тренировочные упражнения:
1.Match the sentences to the corresponding parts of a letter
• 1. How are you? I hope
you are feeling better.
• 2. I’m looking forward
to your reply .
• 3. Sorry it took me so
long to write!
• 4. Please write soon and
tell me about your news.
• 5. That’s all for me now!
• 6. We’re having a very
nice time in Spain.
• 7. How’s everything
going in Paris?
• A. Opening remarks
• B. Main body
• C. Closing remarks
Keys:
A. 1,3
B. 6, 7
C. 2,4,5
A. You
asked
me about
time. I don’t
haveright
much oforder
it on
2.Put
the
parts
of my
thefreeletter
in the
weekdays. After school I come home and start doing my homework.
After that I watch my favourite TV programme then I play computer
games. After that I have supper fnd read books. At weekends I have
more free time. I help my parents about the flat and then meet my
friends and we either go for a walk or to the cinema.
B. Write to me soon!
Best wishes,
Anna
C.
8, 41, Gagarin Street,
Kanevskaya, Russia
21/07/2010
Dear Alex,
D. Keeping fit is very important. How do you keep fit? Where do you
do your exercise and how often? Do you play sport games?
E. Thanks for your letter! It was cool to hear from you!
3.Write three questions to your
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pen friend about his/her
statements.
1. I have just bought a new car!
2. My sister went to Africa last summer.
3. I am planning a trip to England.
4. My brother has bought a new laptop.
5. We have just come back from your holiday!
6. I have recently moved to a new house.
7. I’ve got two tickets to Madonna’s concert.
8. My cousin is coming to visit me at the weekend.
9. I had a graduation party last Sunday.
10. My uncle is getting married in a week!
4. Read the letter, find and correct mistakes in it.
5. Divide the letter into paragraphs
6. Shorten these sentences, not
changing their meaning
• 1. There are several small cafes there, a number
of rides, fountains and many long and alleys
where one can walk and enjoy the nature.
• 2. It is nice to get your letters! I am really happy
that you had a great holiday.
• 3. I have never been to a foreign country, but I
would like to very much!
• 4. I am waiting for your reply with impatience!
• 5. I want to go on holiday in the summer, but I do
not have much money to do this.