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APA Without Agony
Intext Citations
Overview
 Basic
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Principles
Follow author-date system
Credit words and ideas from other authors
Give information on how to locate the source
 What
about…
How does it work?
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Based on publication criteria for American
Psychological Association (APA)
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Used in social sciences to
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Acknowledge sources of information
Allow readers to locate original sources
Ferrari (2000) has classified
procrastinators as arousal types,
avoiders, and decisional
procrastinators.
Ferrari, J. (2000, Special Issue).
Procrastination and attention: Factor
analysis of attention deficit,
boredomness, intelligence, selfesteem, and task-delay frequencies.
Journal of Social Behavior &
Personality, 15(5), 185-196. Retrieved
from Academic Search Elite database.
intext citation
reference entry
Author-date system
How does it work?
Within a paper
How does it work?
Within the field
COAUTHORS
OPPOSITION
Baumeister Tice
FERRARI
CITED BY
Choi
Psychology
Steel
Philosophy
Perry
How does it work?
How does it work?
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Citations give credit to words or ideas
taken from other authors.
IDEAS Tice and Baumeister
(1997) reject the idea that procrastination
can be a productive strategy.
WORDS “Procrastination is not a
neutral or innocuous form of time
management, let alone a helpful or
beneficial one (as some people claim)”
(Tice & Baumeister, 1997, p. 456).
Where do I fit in?
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Procrastination can be a productive
strategy for adapting to rapidly
changing priorities (Chu & Choi, 2005).
Consider this real-life example. The first
guidelines given to freelance writers are
often amended two or three times as a
project begins. Experienced writers learn
to write one lesson and wait for feedback.
The key to productive procrastination,
according to Chu and Choi, is to use
delay as a proactive strategy.
How does it work?
Two
elements
 Intext citations credit words and ideas
(Chapter 6)
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Reference list locates original source
(Chapter 7)
Ferrari (2000) has classified
procrastinators as arousal types,
avoiders, and decisional
procrastinators.
Ferrari, J. (2000, Special Issue).
Procrastination and attention: Factor
analysis of attention deficit,
boredomness, intelligence, selfesteem, and task-delay frequencies.
Journal of Social Behavior &
Personality, 15(5), 185-196. Retrieved
from Academic Search Elite database.
intext citation
reference entry
Author-date system
What are APA’s principles?
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Acknowledge any words or ideas
from other sources.
Provide enough information
to locate your sources.
Author-date system
Principle 1: Credit ideas
Using APA style
correctly increases a
writer’s credibility
(Boan, Doyle, &
Shahbahrami, 2009).
parenthetical;
no quotation marks
References
Boan, R., Doyle, C., &
Shahbahrami, P. (2009).
American Psychological
Association (APA) guide for
Allied Health Sciences.
Retrieved from
http://www.midlandstech.edu/
healthsciences/
Resources.html
reference entry
Principle 1: Credit exact words
“If the reference is not
correct or the article
cannot be found, the
credibility of the
document becomes
questionable”
(Boan, Doyle, &
Shahbahrami, 2009).
word-for-word;
quotation marks
References
Boan, R., Doyle, C., &
Shahbahrami, P. (2009). APA
format guide for Health
Sciences. Retrieved from
http://www.midlandstech.edu/
healthsciences/
Resources.html
reference entry
Principle 1: Credit twice
Parenthetical
citations point to
the reference list.
Correct use of APA style
makes a writer more
credible
(Boan, Doyle, &
Shahbahrami, 2009).
References
Boan, R., Doyle, C., &
Shahbahrami, P. (2009). APA
format guide for Health
Sciences. Retrieved from
http://www.midlandstech.edu/
healthsciences/
Resources.html
Reference list
entries point to the
original.
Did Ambrose give credit?
CHILDERS
AMBROSE
"Up, up, up…” "Up, up, up….”
Principle 1: Plagiarism check
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"Up, up, up, groping through 
the clouds for what seemed
like an eternity. ... No amount
of practice could have
prepared them for what they
encountered. B-24s,
glittering like mica, were
popping up out of the clouds
all over the sky."
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—Thomas Childers,
Wings of Morning, p. 83
"Up, up, up he went, until he
got above the clouds. No
amount of practice could
have prepared the pilot and
crew for what they
encountered—B-24s,
glittering like mica, were
popping up out of the clouds
over here, over there,
everywhere."
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—Stephen Ambrose,
The Wild Blue, p. 164
Principle 1: Credit carefully
"No amount of practice
could have prepared
[the pilot and crew] for
what they encountered.
B-24s, glittering like
mica, were popping up
out of the clouds"
(Childers, 1995, p. 83)
over here, over there,
everywhere.
parenthetical
References
Childers, T. (1995).
Wings of morning.
New York: Perseus.
…In each case, I footnoted the
passage in question, but failed
to put some words and
sentences into quotation marks.
I am sorry and will make
relevant changes in all future
editions.”—Stephen Ambrose
reference entry
Ambrose’s
apology
Principle 2: Locate the source
Like Hansel and
Gretel, follow the
breadcrumb trail
Intext Citation Format
Print quotations: (Author, year, page number).
Researcherfocused
Burns (2003) has stated that leadership begins
“where change begins” (p. 140).
Chronologyfocused
In 1978, Burns published Leadership, a seminal
work in an emerging field. In 2003,
he proposed solutions to global problems in
Transforming Leadership.
Idea-focused
The innovator’s approach to leadership is
exemplified by Franklin Delano Roosevelt’s first
days in office (Burns, 2003, p. 181).
Intext Citation Format
Paraphrased or no page #: (Author, year).
Researcherfocused
Mann (2005) developed a (10+2)*5 method for
overcoming procrastination.
Chronologyfocused
In 2005, Mann developed a unique method for
overcoming procrastination, which he calls the
(10+2)*5 method.
Idea-focused
The (10+2)*5 method for overcoming
procrastination has three steps: work for ten
minutes, take a two-minute break, and go back
to work, repeating the cycle for an hour (Mann,
2005).
Intext Citation Format
Quotations from Internet:
(Author last name, Year, section header,
paragraph #)
EXAMPLE
Mann (2005) developed a (10+2)*5 method for overcoming
procrastination: work for ten minutes, take a two-minute break,
and go back to work, repeating the cycle for an hour. His advice
seems counterintuitive: “Breaks cannot be missed. Period. Go
surf the web. Now. Seriously. GO!” (Important squirrely rules
section, para. 3).
Intext Citations in ¶
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Acknowledge words
with quotation marks
and intext citation.
Acknowledge ideas
with intext citation only.
Insert date the first time an
author’s name is mentioned
in a paragraph.
Place any remaining
information at the end of
material from a source.
Intext citations apply to one
paragraph.
What is procrastination?
Steel (2008) has described
procrastination as trading “shortterm gain for long-term pain.”
Ferrari (2000) classified
procrastinators as arousal types,
avoiders, and decisional
procrastinators. In his view, most
people occasionally put things off,
but some are chronic
procrastinators whose delays
disrupt their lives: “Remember, 80%
of us procrastinate, but 20% are
procrastinators” (2005).
Both Steel (2008) and Ferrari
(2000, 2005) emphasized the
negative. However, Chu and Choi
(2005) found strategic delay could
Nonretrievable Info
Retrievable
Nonretrievable
Include in reference list
• books
• web articles
• magazines
• newsgroup postings
• videos
Cite only in text
(S. Oh, personal communication, August 27, 2007)
• letters
• in-person interviews
• emails
• phone calls
What’s the error?
Gesundheit, A. (2009, August 28). Interview
with Kaplan librarian.
Plotz, D. (2002, December 11). The plagiarist:
Why Stephen Ambrose is a vampire. Slate.
Retrieved from
http://slate.msn.com/?id=2060618
INTEXT CITATION ONLY
(A. Gesundheit, personal communication,
August 28, 2009).
Details, details
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Principle 1
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What to quote
Block quotations
Placing parenthetical citations
No page number
Principle 2
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No author
Many authors
Quoted quotation
No date
Many sources
What to Quote
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Any words from
the original should
be quoted.
Exceptions
 common language
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writ of habeas corpus
situational leadership
theory
 common knowledge
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widely known
easily available
in standard
references
At least half the mystery
novels published violate
the law that the solution,
once revealed, must seem
to be inevitable.
—Raymond Chandler
Raymond Chandler declared
that readers should feel that
the solution of a mystery is
“inevitable.”
Quotations < 40 words
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Set off someone else’s exact words
with quotation marks
 “Down these mean streets
a man must go who is not himself
mean, who is neither tarnished
nor afraid” (Chandler, 1945).
 Raymond Chandler (1945)
believed that a detective should
be “the best man in his world.”
Quotations 40+ words
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Set off long quotations
as block quotations
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Use a new line and
left indent instead of
quotation marks
Preview block quotes
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Hint: Word will count words
if you highlight them and
choose Tools, Word Count.
The classic definition of a
detective comes from “The
Simple Art of Murder”:
Down these mean streets
.5" a man must go who is not himself
mean, who is neither tarnished nor
afraid. The detective in this kind of
story must be such a man. He is
the hero, he is everything….
He must be, to use a rather
weathered phrase, a man of
honor…. (Chandler, 1945)
Remember Intext Citations
Basic format: (Author, year, page or section head).
Researcherfocused
Burns (2003) has stated that leadership begins
“where change begins” (p. 140).
Chronologyfocused
In 1978, Burns published Leadership, a seminal
work in an emerging field. In 2003,
he proposed solutions to global problems in
Transforming Leadership.
Idea-focused
The innovator’s approach to leadership is
exemplified by Franklin Delano Roosevelt’s first
days in office (Burns, 2003, p. 181).
No Page # / Header?
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If author/date are given in text,
that information is not repeated
within parentheses at the end.
 Use only stable page numbers.
 Use section headers for Internet
sources that have them (Steel,
n.d., My Definition, para. 1).
Stable page numbers
• book
• print version
• PDF
According to Tannen (1991), genuine
debate has been replaced by an
“argument culture” in which people
reflexively attack others’ positions.
no page number / header?
Source Reflective Statement
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Add comment to show where source
material ends and your thoughts begin.
According to Tannen (1991), genuine debate has
been replaced by an “argument culture” in which
people reflexively attack others’ positions. Some
readers might assume that Tannen believes that
everyone should just try to get along, but her
position is not so simplistic. Tannen argues that…
source-reflective statement
Quotation Sandwich
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Top slice of bread: introduction
 Filling: material from source
 Bottom slice: relationship to topic
Ferrari (2005) has studied procrastination in
college students. He has identified three types
of procrastinators: arousal types, avoiders,
and decisional procrastinators. Each type puts
things off for a different reason. Knowing what
triggers procrastination is the first step in
overcoming the habit.
What about… no author?
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Start with key words from title
 Use only as much as necessary
 Follow standard formatting
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(“Personality,” 2008).
(Types of Procrastinators, 2005).
(“Procrastination,” 2008a)
(“Procrastination,” 2008b)
What about…many authors?
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Consult the Publication Manual, Table 6.1
What about…quoted quote?
 Ideally,
find the original
 Second-best: use as cited in to direct readers
to reference list entry
INDIRECT QUOTATION
Procrastinators trade “short term gain for long term pain”
according to Steel (as cited in Kahn, 2008).
REFERENCE ENTRY
Kahn, U. (2008, December 7 ). Academics invent a mathematical
equation for why people procrastinate. The Telegraph.
Retrieved from http://www.telegraph.co.uk/
What about…no date?
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Use n.d.
INTEXT
Steel (n.d.) defined procrastination as
“to voluntarily delay an intended course
of action despite expecting to be worse
off for the delay.”
REFERENCE LIST
Steel, P. (n.d.). Definition. Retrieved
August 28, 2009, from Procrastination
Central Web site: http://procrastinus.com
What about…many sources?
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Separate with semicolon
 Alphabetize within citation
to match order of reference list
MULTIPLE CITATION
Most researchers emphasize the negative
consequences of procrastination (Ferarri, 2005;
Steel, 2008; Tice & Baumeister, 1997).
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