Transcript Sentence combining
Simon Nham
Sentence combining is: Making the sentence smoother Easier to understand or clarify Putting detailed sentence of two or more short, choppy sentences
Short sentences are easy to read, but several of them in a row can become so monotonous that meaning gets lost.
In other words, it gets you or the reader BORED.
A BMW screamed around the corner.
The BMW was fire-red.
It screeched to a stop in front of the doors.
The doors led into the school.
The fire-red BMW screamed around the corner and screeched to a stop in front of the school doors.
Screaming around the corner, the fire-red BMW screeched to a stop in front of the school doors.
Punctuation- combining sentences using punctuation marks such as dash (-), semicolons(;) and colons (:) Coordination- combining sentences using conjunction words such as FANBOYS Subordination- making one sentence more important than the other ( one independent and one dependent clause) Reduction- reducing sentences into phrases Apposition-the second expression that is supporting the first expression
1. Hartford is the capital of Connecticut. It is the second largest city in the state.
2. Hartford was once known as an industrial center. It was the home of several manufacturers. They made firearms, typewriters, bicycles, and even cars.
1. Hartford, the second largest city in the state, is the capital of Connecticut.
2. Once known as an industrial center, Hartford was the home of manufacturers of firearms, typewriters, bicycles, and even cars.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ quizzes/combining_quiz2.htm
http://eslus.com/LESSONS/GRAMMAR/CO MBINE/S1.htm
http://www.slideshare.net/derrallg/sentence combining-part-one/