Transcript 雅思小作文
雅思小作文 Lisa • • • • • • 1 曲线图（Curve） 2 饼状图（Pie Chart） 3 表格（Table） 4 柱状图（Column Graph） 5 条状图（Bar Chart） 6 流程图（Diagram，包括地图） 小作文写作结构 • 1 引出问题（Introduction）：用一句或两句话 综合介绍一下曲线图所表示的内容。第一句话一 般给出图标内容简介。 • 注意两点： • 第一：时态：第一句用（一般）现在时 • 第二：千万不要照抄原文给出的句子，要“同义 替换”（paraphrase） 小作文写作结构 • • • • 2 正文（Describing the graph in details） 注意时态：用一般过去时 3 结尾（Conclusion） 可以用一句或两句话结尾，但不要加入自 己的观点和评论 小作文写作原则 • 1 首句永远概括全部 • 2 中间永远找最值点/极值点 • 3 最后总结概括 小作文官方要求 • Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 小作文官方要求 • • • • • • 形式：说明文 字数：不少于150字 时间：建议20分钟 要求考生对提供的信息进行选择 要求考生报告所提供信息的主要特征 要求考生对所关联的信息作比较 小作文官方要求 • TA：Task Achievement（任务完成程度） • CC：Coherence and Cohesion（结构与衔接 程度） • LR：Lexical Resource（词汇丰富程度） • GRA：Grammatical Range and Accuracy （语法应用程度） 雅思小作文模板 • 单词篇 • 上升 • 动词：rise; increase; go up; climb; boom; rocket; • 名词：a rise(in); an increase; a growth; an upward trend; a boom 雅思小作文模板 • 下降： • 动词：fall(to); decline; decrease; dip; drop; go down; slump; reduce • 名词：a drop(in); a slump in; a fall in; a reduction in 雅思小作文模板 • 不变 • 动词：level out(at); do not change; remain stable/steady(at); stay constant; maintain the same level • 名词：a leveling out(of); no change 雅思小作文模板 • • • • • 波动 动词：fluctuate; 名词：fluctuation 达到最高： 动词：peak(at); reach a peak(of) 雅思小作文模板 • • • • 是多少 stand at 变化XX的 Rapid; quick; swift; speedy; sudden; steady’ gradual; slow; 雅思小作文模板 • 很大的 • Dramatic; sharp; huge; enormous; steep; substantial; considerable; significant; marked; • 很小的 • Slight; small; minimal 小作文对比句子 • （5分）The graph shows some similarities between the birth rates of China and the USA from 1920 to 2000. • （6分）The graph provided reveals some surprising similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000. 小作文对比句子 • （7分）A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）First, China’ birth rate increased from about 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935. Then it decreased sharply to just 5 percent in the 1940s. • （6分）China’s birth rate first increased from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in the 1940s. 小作文对比句子 • （7分）Increasing from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, China’s birth rate then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in the 1940s. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）Then the US birth rate increased markedly to over 15 percent in 1950. • （6分）There was then a marked increase in US fertility to over 15 percent in 1950. • （7分）The US then saw/witnessed a marked increase to over 15 percent in 1950. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）These two figures are about crime in Britain. • （6分）The two figures given concern criminality in Britain. • （7分）Given are two figures concerning criminality in Britain. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）However, crime decreases dramatically among men and women over the following 20 or 30 years. • （6分）However, there are dramatic decreases in criminal convictions among both sexes over the subsequent decades. • （7分）The subsequent decades, however, saw/witnessed dramatic decreases in criminality among both sexes. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）On the other hand, all other activities became less popular. • （6分）In stark contrast, however, the popularity of all other activities decreased. • （7分）In stark contrast, however, all other activities decreased in popularity. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）Eating out was the second most popular hobby in 1985, at 23 percent of all people surveyed. However, it fell to just 8 percent in 1995. • （6分）Dining out was the second most widely enjoyed pastime in 1985, accounting for 23 percent of respondents. However, it slipped to a mere 8 percent in 1995. 小作文对比句子 • （7分）Dining out——which was the second most widely enjoyed pastime in 1985, accounting for 23 percent of respondents——slipped to a mere 8 percent in 1995. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）Interestingly, the newer metro systems are much shorter than the older ones. • （6分）It is interesting to note that the more recently established metro systems are far shorter than the elder ones. • （7分）One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established metro systems are considerably shorter than the elder ones. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）At the same time, the Paris metro can transport the second largest number of people, at 850 million. • （6分）Meanwhile, the Paris metro has the second largest carrying capacity, with 850 million. • （7分）With 850 million, meanwhile, the Paris metro has the second largest carrying capacity. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）It is also important to note that more girls go to high school in all parts of the world except East Asia. • （6分）It is also worth noting that females are more likely to attend secondary school in all regions except East Asia. • （7分）Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia. 小作文对比句子 • （5分）The diagram given shows how mobile phones are recycled. 循环使用 • （6分）The diagram given illustrates the process by which mobile phones are recycled. • （7分）Given is a diagram illustrating the process by which mobile phones are recycled.