Transcript using parallelism (p226).ppt

using parallelism (p226)
平行結構
parallelism presents equivalent ideas in
grammatical equivalent form. dressing
hem in the same grammatical garb calls
attention to their kinship and adds
smoothness and polish.
demonstration
• Jame's outfit was wrinkled, mismatched, and he
needed to wash it.(單字和獨立的子句)
• Parallelism Jame's outfit was wrinkled,
mismatched, and dirty.(都是單字)
• Oscar likes reading books, attending plays, and
to search for antiques.(不同的詞組)
• parallelism>Oscar likes reading books, attending
plays, and searching for antiques. (一樣的詞組)
Parallelism doesn't always stop with a single
sentence. Writers sometimes use it in a series of
sentences.
例:
• He had never lost his childlike innocence.
He had never lost his sense of wonder
• He had never lost his sense of joy in
nature's simplest gifts.
Balance
A special form of parallelism, positions two
grammatically equivalent ideas on opposite sides of
some pivot point, such as a word or punctuation mark.
Hope for the best, and prepare for the worst.
When I'm right, nobody ever notices; when I'm
wrong, nobody ever forgets.
EXERCISE
• 1. Professor Bartlett enjoys helping students, counseling advisees,
and participation in faculty meetings.
• >>Professor Bartlett enjoys helping students, counseling advisees,
and participating faculty meetings.
• 8.Joe's problem is not that he earns too little money but spending it
foolishly.
• >>Joe's problem is not earning too little money but spending it
foolishly.
• 9.The room was dark, gloomy, and everything was dusty
• >>The room was dark, gloomy, and dusty.