Transcript Indecision/Procrastination Writing Workshop PPT

Hamlet Procrastination/Indecision
Workshop
Labeling
 Make a key at the top of the person’s paper using your
highlighters
 Sample:
 Green=Statement
 Yellow=Proof
 Pink=Commentary
 Label the topic sentence
 Label the transition at the end
 Highlight statement, proof, and commentary using your key
Evaluate Your Claim
 Does it connect Hamlet’s procrastination and indecision to
the characterization of Hamlet?
 What do we know about Hamlet because of his procrastination
and indecision?
 Does it connect Hamlet’s procrastination and indecision to
the outcomes of the play?
 If you do not have a claim, write one now. If you do have one,
rewrite so that is the clearest it can be.
Evaluate Connections
 Draw a line between the first quote’s commentary and the
claim. Evaluate if you have made this connection in your
commentary.
 If yes, draw a check mark next to the line
 If no, draw and “x” on the line.
 Repeat with your second (and third, etc.) quote
 Only draw a check mark if the connection is clear and
explicit. I should not need to take a leap of faith to get where
you are going.
Peer Review
 Remember to fill out the claim area at the top of the page.
 80% of you did not do this last time.
 Remember to offer a quote/evaluate third quote in that last
section.
 60% of you did not do this last time.