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雅思写作高分直播互动班
主讲：赖劲松
环球英语网校直播课堂 www.eng24.com
赖劲松 Andrew Lai
 广州环球雅思学校写作中心主任and首席写作讲师；
 雅思写作教学十二年；
 曾担任雅思考点模拟考官；
 曾师从雅思写作考官；
 以启发性critical thinking教学为主；
完全按照雅思写作评分标准授课。
已帮助大量考生获得写作6、6.5、7甚至7.5分。
The Marking Criteria of Task2
• Task Response
.Coherence and Cohesion
.Lexical Resource
.Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Task Response
• 先看6分task response的要求：
• Term1: addresses all parts of the task, although some
parts may be more fully covered than others.
• Term2: presents a relevant position, although the
conclusions may become unclear or repetitive.
• Term3: presents relevant main ideas but some may
be inadequately developed or unclear.
Task Response
• 再看7分task response的要求：
• Term1: addresses all parts of the task.
• Term2: presents a clear position throughout the
response.
• Term3: presents, extends and supports main ideas
but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise
and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.
• 最后瞅一眼5分的Term1: addresses the task only
partially. 4分的是responds to the task in a minimal
way.
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
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1. Identify opinions and facts ;
Three question types:
Argumentation 议论文 必须argue for or argue against ，
必须体现refute(批驳)
Typical questions look like;
题目中含有一个观点
例题1：Universities should accept equal numbers of male
and female students in every subject. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?
题目中含有两个观点
例题2：Some people think that parents should teach
children how to be good members of society. Others,
however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• 2)Report  typical questions are about causes/reasons, effects/
problems, solution/measures
• 例题3：Studies suggest that children now spend more time on watching
television than in the past and less time on active and creative things.
What do you think this is the case|?
• What measures could be taken to increase children's creativity?
• 例题4：In today's world, people often throw away old things and then
buy new ones. However, the broken things were always repaired and
used again in the past.
• What are the reasons of this tendency? What problems will be brought
to society?
• 3) Pros and Cons 利弊题 --> 官方归入argumentation, 也必须argue,必须
refute
• 例题5：Some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to
do other things they like to do.
• Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for them who
want to do so?
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• 2. Make comparisons  find out differences, relationship or/and
similarities ;
• 1) Find out differences
• A. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success,
others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.
• B. Children develop faster socially when going to school at an early age.
They make friends and learn how to get on with other children of a
similar age. This is not possible at home because they are the only child,
or because their brothers and sisters are older or younger.
• 2)Find out relationship
• Technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional
skills and ways of life.
• Nature and nurture are not mutually exclusive. Outstanding musicians
and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both
good training and natural talent.
• 3) Find out similarities
• A foreign language is simply another language. As long as a person can
use their mother tongue well, it is not necessary to assume that learning
a foreign language requires extra linguistic talent.
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• 3 Use appropriate degrees of certainty flexibility and precision;
• 表示频率：never, rarely, occasionally, sometimes, not so often, often,
usually, frequently,
• very often, always.
• 表示范围： nobody, few, a few, not many, the minority, some, many, so
many, the majority, most, everyone/all people
• 情态动词的程度把握will/would/may/might，can /may/might/，will
probably/ would probably,
• It must have happened.
• 表示倾向：tend to do something，have a tendency to do something, be
inclined to do sth, have an inclination to do sth, more likely to do sth,
less unlikely to do sth, be prone to doing sth, prefer to do sth, would
rather do sth.
• 其它常用的Generally speaking, On average, By and large, It seems
that…,It seems to be true that…, seemingly, It appears, It looks like,
There seems to be plenty of evidence to prove this view that…,
completely, entirely, overall, To a large extent, To some extent, partly,
partially, …
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• 4. Make inferences reasoning /sequencing
• 例题6：Some people suggest that cars should be
banned to enter the city center in order to solve the
traffic problems. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
• 例题7：Everyone should stay in school until age of
18.
• To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• 5. Stick to the main purpose
• 例题8: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve
growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do
you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think
might be effective?
• 例题9：Some people think that it is better to educate boys
and girls in separate schools.
• Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more
from attending mixed schools.
• Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• 6. Relate it to our reality
• Include examples from your own knowledge
or experience.
• 7. Give reasons, not effectsdifferentiate
cause from effect
• Give reasons to support your answer.
Lesson1:Critical Thinking(TR)
• Class Assingments (choose one )
• 1. Some people think that developing countries should invite
large foreign companies to open offices and factories to grow
their economies. However, other people believe that the
developing countries should keep the large companies out
and develop local companies instead. Discuss both these
views and give your own opinion.( 两个观点）
• 2. Pollution and environmental damage always result from a
country developing and becoming richer. Some people think
these problems cannot be avoided. To what extent do you
agree or disagree? （一个观点）
• Andrew Lai 赖劲松
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