Transcript Of Mice and Men

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Literary Analysis Essay
Writing an argumentative essay is essentially answering a
question and engaging in a debate.
Debate: Is George and Lennie’s relationship mutually
beneficial or is it one-side?
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You must defend your idea/theory (thesis)!
Pick one side of the argument. You are not allowed to sit on
the fence.
Create a compelling argument that your reading audience
will believe and lean towards.
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Support/Evidence
o MUST include 2-3 passages/quotes from the novel per Body ¶
o Quotes should support your analysis, your characterization of George and
Lennie, or the complexity of the debate.
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Format (MLA)
o 5-paragraph essay
o Typed: 1” margins, 12-point font, double spaced, indent ¶s,
o Header with name, teacher, class, & date
o Appropriate title (not the name of the assignment): must be clever and
contain the title of the novel and the author.
o Must write in present tense
o No first or second person (I, me, my, we, us, you, your). Third person only.
o Page numbers after quotes in ( )
• Appear at the end of the sentence before the period
• Only first ( ) must contain author’s last name ie. (Steinbeck 10).
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Introductory Paragraph
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Opener/Attention Getter
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Goal is to create a broader context (i.e this essay is specifically about George and
Lennie’s relationship in Steinbeck’s Of Mice and Men; however, many points can be
made about mutuality.
Extend/Explain the Opener
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Too many writers shift too quickly from the broad or abstract opener directly into the
assigned topic---DON’T!!!
Let your idea develop. This could go on for 2-3 (or more) sentences if it’s interesting.
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Connect to the assigned topic
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Establish your Thesis
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For this essay, it’s argumentative, so you need to take a stand: is George and Lennie’s
relationship mutually beneficial or is it one-sided.
Example: Even though George and Lennie’s relationship may appear one-sided, in fact it
is mutually beneficial arrangement where each character profits.
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Body Paragraph 1
o Topic sentence that examines the George and Lennie’s relationship at the
beginning of the novel (first 3 Chapters)
o Develop/Support your topic with 2-3 passages/quotes from the text.
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Body Paragraph 2
o Topic sentence that examines the George and Lennie’s relationship through the
middle of the novel (Chapters 4-5)
o Develop/Support your topic with 2-3 passages/quotes from the text.
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Body Paragraph 3
o Topic sentence that examines the George and Lennie by the end of the novel
(Chapter 6)
o Develop/Support your topic with 2-3 passages/quotes from the text.
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Note: Organizing your paper by moving through the book chronologically
will allow you to show the relationship becoming more mutual or onesided as the rising action creates more tension and stress on the
characters.
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Must align with thesis
Should not be a quote
Should not include a specific detail or example
Should use transitional words
Should indicate the topic of that paragraph
Examples:
o For instance, George may play the frustrated parent, but on the open
road George and Lennie display evidence of their mutually beneficial
relationship and well-balanced character traits.
o As the novel progresses, George and Lennie’s interpersonal relationship
continues to reveal the mutual benefits for both characters.
o In the end, the true nature of their mutually beneficial relationship is
most strongly emphasized in the final moments of the novel.
o Thus, George and Lennie were true comrades existing in a mutually
beneficial relationship, which sadly came to an end. (reworded thesis)
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Introducing the quote
o Identify Speaker: character or narrator
o Use words other than says in the dialogue tag (states, comments, yells,
pleads, comfortingly says, angrily shouts). Capture the speaker’s tone.
o Set the scene: This is evident when George looses his temper and
angrily yells, “ “
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Recording the quote
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For a narration use “ ” (two double quotes)
For a dialogue quote use “’ ‘” (double quoted and single quotes)
Include page number in parenthesis and then a period (25).
? and ! place inside the “ ” and a period is still placed after the (89).
Explaining the quote
o Provide an explanation of the quote
o Do not translate the words of the speaker
o The objective is to explain the significance of the quote and how it
shows whether George & Lennie’s relationship is mutually beneficial or
one-sided. You chose this quote to prove your thesis, so explain how it
emphasizes/highlights your theory about their relationship.
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The concluding sentences…
o Should not include a specific detail or example
o Should not be a quote
o Should not be the explanation of a quote
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Each paragraph should end with a concluding sentence
that…
o Circles back to summarize the main point of the paragraph.
o Aligns with the thesis statement.
o Wraps up the paragraph with a nice neat bow
Note: Topic and concluding sentences provide a road map for readers
and add consistency.
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Conclusion
o Restate Thesis: Thus, George and Lennie were true comrades
existing in a mutually beneficial relationship, which sadly came to
an end.
o Evaluate Steinbeck's position with regards to the "loneliness" theme
in the novel.
• How does their relationship highlight this theme?
• What is Steinbeck saying about human nature through George and
Lennie’s relationship via its mutualism or one-sidedness?
o Extend the conclusion
• Through George and Lennie’s relationship is Steinbeck asserting that
"people need people"? Why or why not?
• Clincher
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Two days on Computers (20-point grade for Writing Production)
o Day 1: Write introduction
o Day 2: Write at least one body paragraph
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Weekend HMWK- Sticky Note quotes and passages for each of
the body paragraphs.
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Friday, March 27th – Bring a printed hardcopy of essay to class
for peer-editing (25-point grade)
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Monday, March 30th – Essay will be due to turnitin.com by
11:59pm (Essay is a 200-point grade )