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Dimensions of Media Object Compehensibility Lawrie Hunter Kochi University of Technology http://www.core.kochi-tech.ac.jp/hunter/ Dimensions Island of of Shikoku Media Object Compehensibility KUT Lawrie Hunter Kochi University of Technology http://www.core.kochi-tech.ac.jp/hunter/ Niigata Osaka Kochi A pattern language for MMC Source of insight: language / language learning Second language (L2) learning: a cognitive process? Comprehension of partially acquired L2: revealing of the nature of text/media. Language learning issues are germane to MMC. A pattern language for MMC Background work towards a human-communication paradigm for the guidance of machines Intervention author's structural model of content information (for second language learning materials) Frame the new multidisciplinary approach of machine-mediated communication Discussion of parameters of difficulty Objective development of a pattern language for that multidisciplinary approach to MMC Focus factors influencing the difficulty of comprehension of media objects Question how media objects carry information. Ground: related issues in second language learning materials Exemplars ‘considerate text’ ‘considerate multimedia’ Generating parameters of difficulty in media object comprehension Tempering: questions of significance and applicability for machine automation. L2 learning materials The creation of second language (L2) learning materials demands document transparency: 1. document purpose 2. document content 3. target behavior 4. target lexical items must all be more immediately apparent to the learner than in the case of materials for L1 medium learning scenarios L2 learning materials The creation of second language (L2) learning materials demands document transparency: 1. document purpose 2. document content 3. target behavior 4. target lexical items work towards transparency is informed by difficulty-related issues difficulty-related issues inform human interaction with info media Earlier work: an EAP tool David Kolb* re using hypertext to present scholarly text: "...the easiest ways of making a complex argument available in HT tend to move the text toward linear structures that do not take full advantage of the possibilities of linked text." *in a talk to KMI at the Open University Earlier work: an EAP tool David Kolb* re using hypertext to present scholarly text: "...the easiest ways of making a complex argument available in HT tend to move the text toward linear structures that do not take full advantage of the possibilities of linked text." "...what the HT can do is present the argument, but also use linkage and juxtaposition to make the reader’s engagement with the argument more creative, self-conscious, and self-critical." *in a talk to KMI at the Open University Earlier work: an EAP tool Lawrie Hunter re using hypertext to present technical L2 text: For the L2 reader, engagement can only be enhanced if the rhetorical and information structures are articulated. Earlier work: an EAP tool Lawrie Hunter re using hypertext to present technical L2 text: For the L2 reader, engagement can only be enhanced if the rhetorical and information structures are articulated. What the HT can do for the NNR/W is tp present simultaneously the various faces of a research paper: the rhetorical moves; the bits of structured information; the text; necessary glosses. * NNR/W EAP = non-native reader/writer of English for Academic Purposes Earlier work: an EAP tool Lawrie Hunter re using hypertext to present technical L2 text: For the L2 reader, engagement can only be enhanced if the rhetorical and information structures are articulated. What the HT can do for the NNR/W is to present simultaneously the various faces of a research paper: the rhetorical moves; the bits of structured information; the text; necessary glosses. And if the NNR/Ws design their personal interface, a negotiated pattern language of NNR/W EAP* will emerge. * NNR/W EAP = non-native reader/writer of English for Academic Purposes Arguably important direction "Tomorrow's literacies... need to be process and systems literacies.” -John Thackara, In the Bubble: Designing in a complex world. MIT Press 2005. Structural view of writing Train of argument This is the domain of structures up here. Rhetorical structures Extension Functional structures Knowledge structures Cohesion devices This is the domain of texture down here. Diversions Grammar (sentence surface structure) Background Rhetorical structure theory, systemic functional linguistics and knowledge structure mapping form a hierarchy of structures, whereas grammar and sentence diagrams reflect rules for texture management. Structural view of writing Train of argument This is the domain of structures up here. False hierarchy: the train stops here. Rhetorical structures Extension Functional structures Knowledge structures Cohesion devices This is the domain of texture down here. Diversions Grammar (sentence surface structure) Background Rhetorical structure theory, systemic functional linguistics and knowledge structure mapping form a hierarchy of structures, whereas grammar and sentence diagrams reflect rules for texture management. L2 reader needs analysis Knowledge Language skills Facilities Niche grammar structures Argument sequencing Concordance & collocation resource Niche rhetorical structures Info-structured sentence generation Bank of model research papers (annotated*) General register repertoires (distinguishing formal academic from informal academic) Mimicry of model language Research Paper text structure and information structure *c.f. Brown and Brown’s ‘annotation’ L2 reader wants analysis In a technical hypertext, L2 reader/writers want*: 1. Glossing (of 'difficult' terms and phrases) 2. Moves indicator 3. Lexia position indicator 4. PDF-drawer-like phrase recurrence tab 5. Register converter (e.g. research paper <=> presentation script) 6. Information structure maps for atomic utterances 7. Overall argument map on every lexia (similar to Horn's argument maps or Rhetorical Structure Analysis?) *Based on a survey of 22 PhD engineering students Technical hypertext design: NEEDS A pattern language? WANTS www.patternlanguage.com Technical hypertext design: NEEDS A pattern language? WANTS www.patternlanguage.com …The language, and the processes which stem from it, merely release the fundamental order which is native to us. They do not teach us, they only remind us of what we know already, and of what we shall discover time and time again, when we give up our ideas and opinions, and do exactly what emerges from ourselves. -Christopher Alexander, The Timeless Way of Building Do humans have a GRAPHIC THOUGHT FACILITY? < $$$ ! The knowledge structure map is a matrix (confluence) for the situated learner* and the situated mentor to confirm context and the nature of "stolen property."** *Jean Lave **Duguid and Brown Hunter’s knowledge structure map links Classification Description Degree comparison < Attribute comparison big Contrast ! Sequence Cause-effect 2005 project: design level EEAP* students: HT designs for the analysis of technical academic papers. *EEAP = Engineering English for Academic Purposes, a subset of EAP, which is a subset of ESP (English for Specific Purposes) Hunter L. (2005) Technical Hypertext Accessibility: Information Structures and Rhetorical Framing. Presentation at HyperText 2005, Salzburg. http://www.lawriehunter.com/presns/%20HT05poster0818.htm TEXT STRUCTURE RHETORICAL MOVES Introduction Common knowledge Background Question Methods and materials Results Conclusion INFO STRUCTURE Describe Cite Report Explain Compare Claim Sequence Question Qualify Evaluate Observations INFOMAP(s) Decide Infer Project Classify UTTERANCE(s) In general, power plants boil some liquid to make steam, which rotates turbines, which generate electricity. Power plants boil a liquid to produce steam, which is used to rotate turbines, which in turn generate electricity. Cause-effect Contrast TEXT STRUCTURE RHETORICAL MOVES Introduction Common knowledge Background Question Methods and materials Results Conclusion INFO STRUCTURE Describe Cite Report Explain Compare Claim Sequence Question Qualify Evaluate Observations INFOMAP(s) Decide Infer Project Classify UTTERANCE(s) Traditional power plants use fossil fuel heat or heat from nuclear fission to boil water and produce steam at 500°C. Older type power plants boil water with heat from fossil fuel combustion or nuclear fission to produce steam with a temperature of 500°C. Cause-effect Contrast TEXT STRUCTURE RHETORICAL MOVES Introduction Common knowledge Background Question Methods and materials Results Conclusion INFO STRUCTURE Describe Cite Report Explain Compare Claim Sequence Question Qualify Evaluate Observations INFOMAP(s) Decide Infer Project Classify UTTERANCE(s) OTEC power plants use seawater heat to boil ammonia and produce steam at 20°C. OTEC type power plants boil ammonia with the heat of the sea to produce steam with a temperature of 20°C. Cause-effect Contrast TEXT STRUCTURE RHETORICAL MOVES Introduction Common knowledge Background INFOMAP(s) Describe Cite Report Explain Compare Claim Sequence Classify Question Methods and materials Question Qualify Results Evaluate Observations Conclusion INFO STRUCTURE Decide Infer Project UTTERANCE(s) Traditional power plants use fossil fuel heat or heat from nuclear fission to boil water and produce steam at 500°C, whereas OTEC type power plants boil ammonia using the heat of the sea to produce steam with a temperature of 20°C. Older type power plants boil water with heat from fossil fuel combustion or nuclear fission to produce steam with a temperature of 500°C, while OTEC power plants use seawater heat to boil ammonia and produce steam at 20°C. Cause-effect Contrast Obstacle in 2005 project Massive diversity in learner perception of knowledge structures. Obstacle in 2005 project Massive diversity in learner perception of knowledge structures. Structural view of writing Train of argument Diversions Rhetorical structures Extension This is the domain of structures up here. Functional structures Knowledge structures Cohesion devices This is the domain of texture down here. Grammar (sentence surface structure) Background False hierarchy: the train stops here. Rhetorical structure theory, systemic functional linguistics and knowledge structure mapping form a hierarchy of structures, whereas grammar and sentence diagrams reflect rules for texture management. Structural view of writing Grammar staging Information orchestration Rhetoric, flow Prescriptive order charts (linear); sentence diagrams Knowledge structure maps Topic/stress and subject-verb distance gizmos Paragraph level Readability charts Knowledge structure maps Old/new and topic/stress gizmos Document level Readability outlines Knowledge structure maps Old/new and topic/stress gizmos Sentence level 2006~ new layer: READABILITY The missing link in technical academic writing: Gopen’s readability -subject-verb distance -topic position / stress position -old/new information placement Background: readability work In the design of traditional high-text language learning materials, readability is a prominent concern. Reading difficulty has for some time been seen as depending on -word length -sentence length -text length -number of sentences per paragraph -vocabulary ‘difficulty’ More recent work has extended this list to include -subject-verb distance -adherence to old/new position conventions -topic position/stress position conventions Treated extensively in Hunter L. (1998) Text Nouveau: Visible Structure in Text Presentation. Computer Assisted Language Learning 11(4) pp. 363-379. Background: MM readability Chun, D. M. and Plass, J. L. 1997. Research on text comprehension in multimedia environments. Language learning and technology 1(1): 60-81. Treated extensively in Hunter L. (1998) Text Nouveau: Visible Structure in Text Presentation. Computer Assisted Language Learning 11(4) pp. 363-379. 2006~ new layer: READABILITY P age Hunter’s new TAW syllabus: assume grammar 1 Readability and cohesion Topic / stress positions Old / new information Subject-verb separation Logic gaps Ambiguity 2 Usage Dictionaries, guides, corpus and concordance 3 Registers Formal academic Informal academic Casual 4 Abstracts and introductions The structure of a paper Outlining Summarizing 5 Organization of information Situation-problem-solution-evaluation General-Specific 6 Information structures, information mapping Description Classification Comparison, includingpie and bar graphs Sequence, including line and bar graphs Cause-Effect Inference (deduction/induction) P ro andCon 7 Rhetoric vs. information Backgroundinformation /new content 8 English models 9 Data commentaries 10 Appendix: language features The Style Dossier: model language selection / evaluation Mimicry skills P lagiarism avoidance TAW-related grammar points Usage points 2006~ new layer: READABILITY P age Textural Grammar Register 1 Readability and cohesion Topic / stress positions Old / new information Subject-verb separation Logic gaps Ambiguity 2 Usage Dictionaries, guides, corpus and concordance 3 4 5 Cohesion Structural Lexical patterns Registers Formal academic Informal academic Casual Abstracts and introductions The structure of a paper Outlining Summarizing Organization of information Situation-problem-solution-evaluation General-Specific Information structures, information mapping Description Classification Comparison, includingpie and bar graphs Sequence, including line and bar graphs Cause-Effect Inference (deduction/induction) P ro andCon Rhetoric vs. information Backgroundinformation /new content Knowledge structures Coherence/readability 6 Functional grammar Information organization 7 Rhetorical device Rhetorical structure 8 English models 9 Data commentaries 10 Appendix: language features The Style Dossier: model language selection / evaluation Mimicry skills P lagiarism avoidance TAW-related grammar points Usage points Readability The creation of second language (L2) learning materials demands appropriate readability. 1. understandable by the learner 2. ‘stretching’ learner knowledge/skill 3. contextualized to support stretching 4. orchestrated with degrees of scaffolding Considerate text One inroad to readability is considerate text: Original framing: ・well-written, ・well-organized, and ・signals the organization of its thought to the reader Considerate text One inroad to readability is considerate text: Original framing: ・well-written, ・well-organized, and ・signals the organization of its thought to the reader More recent takes: -glossing -phrase boundary marking -de-idiomatizing -the Plain English movement -graphic organizers -text nouveau Text nouveau is still text Text comprehension in multimedia environments is a rich variant, BUT : Chun, D. M. and Plass, J. L. 1997. Research on text comprehension in multimedia environments. Language learning and technology 1(1): 60-81. Text comprehension in multimedia environments is a rich variant, BUT : Text nouveau is still text Chun, D. M. and Plass, J. L. 1997. Research on text comprehension in multimedia environments. Language learning and technology 1(1): 60-81. Sharing considerate text L2 learning objects: welcome to the TagTower of Babel! KUT English is a Moodle department. Appropriateness of learning materials/tasks is very complex. Tagging of these materials & tasks is daunting. Sharing considerate text Appropriateness of learning materials/tasks is very complex. Tagging of these materials & tasks is daunting. Fortunately, as David Weinberger points out*, there is a huge amount of metadata out there, but this allows multiple simultaneous organizations of content. *June 12, 2007 interview with IT Conversations http://www.itconversations.com/shows/detail1838.html Weinberger books The Cluetrain Manifesto Small Pieces Loosely Joined Everything is Miscellaneous Considerate multimedia? Considerate text in the context of M3C suggests the notion of considerate multimedia Tentative definition: considerate multimodal objects are those which contain few non-essential obstacles to their comprehension. Considerate multimedia? Considerate text in the context of M3C suggests the notion of considerate multimedia Tentative definition: considerate multimodal objects are those which contain few non-essential obstacles to their comprehension. Tentative definition 2: considerate multimodal objects are those which are tagged for various forms of comprehension difficulty. Considerate multimedia? Multimedia comprehensibility? “Considerate multimedia” confronts vastly more complexity than considerate text Alternative approach: create a set of parameters for multimedia comprehensibility One approach to comprehensibility: explore obstacles to comprehensibility, as has been done in readability work. Multimodal equivalent of readability In the domain of multimodal computer-mediated communication, the question of readability translates as ease of comprehension: How easy is it for a human to extract all the information contained in a multimodal media object (MMO)? Parameters of media object function To measure the ease of extraction of all the INTENDED information contained in a MMO, we need a characterization of the difficulty of extraction: Tentative list of sources of information extraction difficulty, for simplicity’s sake limited here to text objects graphic objects speech objects video objects and combinations thereof. This is a tentative, exploratory framing of MMO comprehensibility, Parameters of media object function Learning object tag ‘shopping list’ Parameter Instance/unit concept density exophoric references per paragraph/page/frame metaphor density metaphors per scene/argument/minute phoneme density phonemes per unbroken utterance* (e.g. Italian speech) phonemes per inhalation phonemes per word phonemes per minute mathematical symbol density numerals per page numerals per sentence formulae per sentence/paragraph formulae per argument noise density superfluous signals per utterance, e.g. "...in 1960, oh, sorry, I meant to say in 1960...) readability stoppages** per sentence asides per sentence/message cognitive dissonances per utterance facial expression/statement conflicts reference transparency anchoring devices per lexia anchoring devices per reference channel-channel synchronicity number of channel-channel synchronicities number of channel-channel asynchronicities message-message agreement number of message-message agreements number of message-message dischords *utterance: minimal spoken, written or graphical communication unit Parameters of media object function Concept density Concept density* in text space Concept density* in aural time Concept density* in video space *concept density = number of exophoric references per sentence/minute/frame Parameters of media object function Metaphor density Metaphors per sentence. Metaphors per argument. Metaphors per minute. Idioms per sentence. Idioms per argument. Idioms per minute. Parameters of media object function Phoneme density Phonemes Phonemes Phonemes Phonemes per per per per unbroken utterance*. exhalation. word. minute. *e.g. Italian speech. Parameters of media object function ‘Noise’ density Superfluous signals/utterance Readability ‘stoppages’ per sentence Asides per sentence/message Cognitive dissonances per utterance Facial expression-statement conflicts Parameters of media object function Symbol density Numerals per page. Numerals per sentence. Formulae per sentence/paragraph. Formulae per rhetorical move. Parameters of media object function Channel imperfections Imperfect audio channel Imperfect text channel Imperfect visual channel Parameters of media object function Channel imperfections Finding: humans retain more info from video with an imperfect audio channel Nass and Brave, Wired for speech Reeves and Nass, The media equation Parameters of media object function Channel-channel discord Parameters of media object function Channel-channel synchronicity Parameters of media object function Message-message harmony Message-message agreements Message-message discords manga vs. knowledge structure maps Both involve reduced text density and spatial highlighting of text, and suggest the question of a 'graphic thought facility' in humans. manga knowledge structure maps Low phoneme density Low phoneme density Isolated conversational text chunks: X idioms per sentence. Isolated descriptive text chunks: 0 idioms per sentence X metaphors per utterance 0 metaphors per utterance X idioms per utterance 0 idioms per utterance Graphical situating: narrative/mood Graphical situating: symbolized relations to other text chunks To illustrate the use of the parameter approach, here is a comparison of two relatively similar types of media objects, manga and knowledge structure maps. Both involve reduced text density and spatial highlighting of text, and suggest the question of a 'graphic thought facility' in humans. Generating parameters of difficulty in media object comprehension Tempering: questions of significance and applicability for machine automation Once a comprehensive set of parameters of MMO comprehensibility has been developed, questions of application will arise. How can (should?) these parameters be situated among larger semantic frameworks? Which of these parameters are relevant to the development of machinemediated communication? How can they be operationalized in computable form? Daunting: ontology-based readability Work on ontology-based research writing * : reforming how scientific research is written/read. EXPO* and the Robot Scientist Does the ontology EXPO feed back from a machine interface with a body of knowledge/practice to a solidification of human interface with that body of knowledge/practice? EXPO: An Ontology of Scientific Research. Ross D. King & Larisa N. Soldatova http://www-tsujii.is.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp/jw-tmnlpo/RossKing.pdf Daunting: ontology-based readability Work on ontology-based research writing * : reforming how scientific research is written/read. “Use of Natural Language is a great hindrance when using computers to store and analyse data hence the growing importance of text-mining. We argue that the content of scientific papers should increasingly be expressed in formal languages. Is writing a scientific paper closer to writing poetry or a computer program?” EXPO: An Ontology of Scientific Research. Ross D. King & Larisa N. Soldatova http://www-tsujii.is.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp/jw-tmnlpo/RossKing.pdf Daunting: ontology-based readability Work on ontology-based research writing * : reforming how scientific research is written/read. Can humans now experience knowledge differently, thanks to machine interface work, i.e. through a formal language imposed for the machine’s sake? Will this reform how we read? how we think? EXPO: An Ontology of Scientific Research. Ross D. King & Larisa N. Soldatova http://www-tsujii.is.s.u-tokyo.ac.jp/jw-tmnlpo/RossKing.pdf References [1] Elsayed, A. (2007) Machine-mediated communication: the technology. 6th IEEE International Conference on Advanced Learning Technologies, ICALT 2006, 5-7 July 2006, Kerkrade, The Netherlands. [2] Hunter, L. (2005) Technical hypertext accessibility: information structures and rhetorical framing. 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D. Pearson, & R. Barr (Eds.), Handbook of reading research (Vol. II, pp. 311-335). Mahwah, NJ: Erlbaum. The Plain English movement http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/index.htm (de-idiomatizing) References 2 Research via ontologies Ian Horrocks http://www.cs.man.ac.uk/~horrocks/ EXPO Ontology of scientific experiments http://expo.sourceforge.net/ Soldatova L.N., Clare A., Sparkes A. and King, R.D. (2006) An ontology for a Robot Scientist. Bioinformatics (Special issue ISMB) (in press). Soldatova, LN & King, RD. (2006) An Ontology of Scientific Experiments. Journal of the Royal Society Interface (in press). EXPO: An Ontology of Scientific Research by Ross D. King & Larisa N. Soldatova, Department of Computer Science, University of Wales, Aberystwyth. Hunter Hunter L. (2005) Technical Hypertext Accessibility: Information Structures and Rhetorical Framing. Presentation at HyperText 2005, Salzburg. http://www.lawriehunter.com/presns/%20HT05poster0818.htm Text Nouveau: Visible Structure in Text Presentation. Computer Assisted Language Learning 11(4) pp. 363-379. (text nouveau) WordbyWord http://www.core.kochi-tech.ac.jp/hunter/WordByWord/index.html (text nouveau) Text usability for non-native readers of English. Ueta, R, Hunter, L. & Ren, X. Proceedings, Information Processing Society of Japan, Vol. 2003.7. Pp. 199-200. (phrase boundary marking) Thank you for your kind attention. Don’t hesitate to write to me. Lawrie Hunter Kochi University of Technology http://www.core.kochi-tech.ac.jp/hunter