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PSSA ELA Item Type Training Text-Dependent Analysis Jeri Thompson, Ed.D.. Senior Associate Center for Assessment 2015 Introductions… Coffee Talk What did you think about during the past month relative to this work ? Page 2 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2054 Agenda: Today: • Developing Text-Dependent Analysis Questions/Prompts (continued – practice and for use in your classroom) • Analyzing the Text-Dependent Analysis Rubric • Scoring student work using the state TDA scoring guidelines Page 3 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Text-Dependent Analysis Let’s Review: 1. Questions/prompts highlight and scaffold key knowledge and information from texts 2. Requires students to examine and use evidence from the text to analyze core understandings and key ideas 3. Expects students to construct a well-written essay to demonstrate analysis of the text, moving beyond answering open-ended questions about explicit and implicit information, summarizing, and being aware of vocabulary or text structure Page 4 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Text-Dependent Analysis Let’s Review: Text-dependent questions requires close reading of a text. These questions require students to provide evidence from the text and to draw inferences based on what the text says in order to support an analysis. This is different from basic reading comprehension questions which require students to read to get the “gist” of the text. Page 5 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Developing TDA Questions (Pages 9-10 in Notes and Resources) Step 1: Read and annotate the text Step 2: Identify the essential understanding(s) and key supporting details from the text (what is noteworthy and what supports this) Step 3: Locate and identify academic vocabulary and key text structures that are connected to the essential understandings and key ideas Step 4: Propose a culminating text-dependent analysis question Step 5: Identify the expected proficient-level response Step 6: Identify the standards associated with the textdependent analysis question Page 6 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Let’s Practice #3 – “You” do… Grade Level Examples Develop a TDA Steps 1 - 3: (Notes & Resources, page 9) • Read and annotate the grade-level text • Identify essential understandings and key supporting details from the text (what is noteworthy and what supports this) • Identify academic vocabulary and key text structures that are connected to the essential understandings and key ideas Discuss these at your table. Page 7 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Let’s Practice #3 – “You” do… Grade Level Examples Based on the Essential Understanding, what are the key supporting details from the text? Step 4: What Text-Dependent Analysis Question could you ask about this text? Step 5: What would you expect to see in a proficient student response? Consider: Does your question require analysis? If not, revise your question. Page 8 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Let’s Practice #3 – “You” do… Grade Level Examples Each group should be prepared to share the grade-level example by: Provide a synopsis of the story Identify the essential understanding Share the Text-Dependent Analysis Question Provide what you would expect to see in a student response Other groups should listen to the information and be prepared to critique by: Providing “warm” and “cool” feedback Page 9 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 TDA Developed Questions… Grade Level Examples Grade 4 Question: • At the end of the passage, Drawing Horses, Marisa states, “But I already know that when this drawing is finished, I’ll be signing it Marisa.” Write an essay analyzing why she makes this statement. Use evidence from the passage to support your response. Page 10 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2014 TDA Developed Questions… Grade Level Examples Grade 5 Question: • The passage “Little by Little Piece by Piece,” is about three brothers who each experience a change in life. Write an essay analyzing which of the three brothers undergoes the most meaningful change in the passage. Use evidence from the passage to support your response. Page 11 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2014 TDA Developed Questions… Grade Level Examples Grade 6 Question: • Skye’s emotions change throughout “The Perfect Swim.” Write an essay analyzing how the shifts in Skye’s emotions are revealed in the passage. Use evidence from the passage to support your analysis. Page 12 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2014 TDA Developed Questions… Grade Level Examples Grade 7 Question: • Authors often use figurative language to describe objects, characters, and situations in their stories. Write an essay analyzing the role that figurative language plays in revealing the significance of the bottled ships in the passage. Use evidence from the passage to support your response. Page 13 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2014 TDA Developed Questions… Grade Level Examples Grade 8 Question: • Authors use various techniques when developing and explaining the motivations of characters. Write an essay analyzing how the author of “The Raft” reveals Dewey’s character and his motivations throughout the passage. Use evidence from the passage to support your response. Page 14 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2014 Expectations in Student Responses ELA Grades 4-8 Text Dependent Analysis Scoring Guidelines (Notes and Resources, page 20) • Examine the Proficient Level “3” of the guidelines • Discuss as a grade level team what a proficient piece of student work would look like; use the PA Core Academic Standards for English Language Arts and/or the Assessment Anchors, as needed • Consider: – What would be acceptable in a response? – What would NOT be acceptable in a response? • Examine each of the other levels and discuss what this would look like in a student response. • Be prepared to share. Page 15 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 What are Text-Dependent Analysis Questions? Analysis: These questions require students to provide evidence from the text and to draw inferences based on what the text says in order to support an analysis. Page 16 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Responding to Text-Dependent Analysis Questions Modes of Analysis 1. What a text says – summary or restatement 2. What a text does – description: discusses important aspects of the presentation of the text (choices of content, author’s perspective, language, and structure) 3. What a text means – analysis: interprets the text and asserts a meaning for the text as a whole (putting the message in a larger context and determine theme) Page 17 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Responding to Text-Dependent Analysis Questions Written Essay Expectations 1. Introduction: compelling introduction or “hook” (e.g., quote, action, personal remark, question) 2. Development: clear focus and controlling idea throughout the essay; includes a short summary plus analysis or reflection 3. Conclusion: relevant statement/section; extends beyond a restatement of introduction 4. Organization: coherence – introduction, body, and conclusion support the focus; sequences and groups related ideas 5. Transitions: connects ideas and reasons 6. Language: appropriate use of vocabulary; authoritative voice; variety of sentence structure 7. Conventions of Standard English Page 18 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Sample Student Responses TDA Questions • Read (or re-read) Grade 4 Text • Examine Grade 4 Text-Dependent Analysis Question At the end of the passage, Drawing Horses, Marisa states, “But I already know that when this drawing is finished, I’ll be signing it Marisa.” Write an essay analyzing why she makes this statement. Use evidence from the passage to support your response Page 19 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Sample Student Responses TDA Questions Discuss as a group: what you would expect to see in the proficient-level response? Page 20 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Sample Student Responses TDA Questions What you would expect to see in the proficient-level response? • Marissa kept trying to draw the horse • Signing her name to the drawing shows that she is pleased with her work • Marissa doesn’t give up despite negative comments from friends and family Page 21 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Student Sample Responses TDA Question: #1 1. Read the student response (4-1) 2. Score the student response 3. Discuss the scores at your table and come to consensus as to why you gave it the score 4. Be prepared to share Page 22 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Sample Student Responses TDA Questions Student Work 4-1 - Score: 3 Analysis: • tried hard to make a perfect horse • did not give up • Understood her picture was not as good as Euphemia’s picture, but still liked it • First good drawing of a horse even if standing still Writing: • Introduction and conclusion to support analysis • Reference to text • Transitions to link ideas • Errors in conventions do not interfere with meaning Page 23 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Student Sample Responses TDA Question: #2 1. Read the student response (4-2) 2. Score the student response 3. Discuss the scores at your table and come to consensus as to why you gave it the score 4. Be prepared to share Page 24 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Sample Student Responses TDA Questions Student Work 4-2 - Score: 1 Analysis: • Does not address the prompt • Insufficient analysis • Evidence doesn’t support the question Writing: • Introduction and conclusion to support analysis • Reference to text but does not support analysis • Inconsistent transitions • Errors in conventions do not interfere with meaning Page 25 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Student Sample Responses TDA Question: #3 1. Read the student response (4-3) 2. Score the student response 3. Discuss the scores at your table and come to consensus as to why you gave it the score 4. Be prepared to share Page 26 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Sample Student Responses TDA Questions Student Work 4-3 - Score: 2 Analysis: • Attempts to address the question, but does not have a clear understanding • Weak analysis focuses more on being called “Messy” • Superficial evidence in an attempt to support the question Writing: • Introduction and conclusion provided • Reference to text but does not support analysis • Uses transitions • Errors in conventions do not interfere with meaning Page 27 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Scoring Student Work Samples Calibration Protocol 1. Read (or reread the text) 2. Read the Text-Dependent Analysis question 3. Discuss as a group what you would expect to see in the proficient-level response? 4. Read the student response and place in groups (high, average, low) 5. Score the student responses 6. Discuss the scores at your table and come to consensus as to why you gave it the score 7. Be prepared to share Page 28 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 YOUR Culminating TDA • Select a text/passage that your students will independently read in your classroom • Develop a TDA that you will administer to your students prior to our next meeting • You may work alone, in pairs, or as grade level teams to develop your TDA • Be prepared to share and receive feedback on the wording of your TDA Page 29 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Session #3 • Bring student work for Student Work Analysis • Develop an Instructional TDA (includes close reading, essay writing, and analysis) • Create a unit framework for TDA Page 30 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Day 2 Wrap-Up Page 31 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 REMEMBER: • Text-dependent analysis questions generally call on students to employ close reading strategies. • Strategies should not be taught in isolation. • The text and the readers’ need to comprehend the text should determine what strategies are activated – not the other way around. • The search for text evidence should activate key strategies such as re-reading and monitoring comprehension. Page 32 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Close Reading Teachers should: • Prompt students to reread text frequently for various text-dependent questions • Encourage students to refer to evidence from the text when responding to TDAs • Provide questions that are varied and might include a combination of formal and informal responses • Use a variety of teaching methods • Use a variety of grouping configurations Page 33 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 Day 2 Ending Notes?? Page 34 •Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015 For more information: Center for Assessment www.nciea.org Jeri Thompson [email protected] 401-316-7840 Page 35 • Thompson •Text-dependent Analysis 2015