Transcript 短文改错专题

NMET2002短文改错
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip
to
Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows,
it’s famous 76.______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.
The weather 77.______
was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot
of
78.______
the mountain. The three of them were very
excited. As we 79. ______
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting
temples
80.______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking
picture
81.______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time
passes quickly. 82.______
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel
at the top 83.______
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the
service was good. 84._____
I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my
85._____
head touched the pillow.
Last week my parents and I took a two-day
trip to
Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone
knows, it’s ∧famous 76. a
mountain with all kinds of plants and
animals. The weather 77. √
was fine. It was about noon ∧we arrived at
the foot of
78. when
the mountain. The three of them were very
excited. As we 79. us
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,
visiting temples
80. visited
and told stories. On the way up I was busy
taking picture 81. pictures
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time
passes quickly. 82. passed
Evening came down. We spent the night in
a hotel at the top 83. down
of the mountain. The food was expensive
and the service was good. 84. but
I was so tired that I fell asleep at the
moment my
85. at
head touched the pillow.
NMET1997
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher,1 _____
Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to 2 _______
Know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself.3 ____
My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4______
Capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We 5_____
Study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese 6 ________
English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot 7________
In my spare time, but now I am interesting in 8________
Football.
Do you play any ball games? What your favourite 9_____
Sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.10_______
Yours,
Li Hua
NMET1998
My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of
1_____
Our school football team. We practise for three times
2____
Every week and often watch football match on 3 _______
together. Play football not only makes us grow up 4______
Tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and
5____
Team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 6______
For the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7_______
Teaches us the important of obedience. Each 8_______
Player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9_______
the team. And they must not break the rules too 10______
often if we want tp win the game.
NMET1999
Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago
1___
I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2______
A little tired after a day’s work and watch TV 3______
Demands very little effort. Unfortunate there are 4______
Too many people among my family. Some wanted 5_____
To see the programme while others preferred 6________
Another. I am happy with any programme but 7_______
The others spent a lot time arguing and there 8______
Was no way of settling the matter except by 9______
Selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. 10____
NMET2000
The day before the speech contest English teacher 1___
talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 2___
wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would 3___
win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so 4____
nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people
5_____
present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in
6_____
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered 7
___
her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first
8____
prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
9___
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English
teacher.10___
NMET2001
Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither
brothers nor 1___
sisters – in any other words, I am an only child. My
parents 2_____
love me dearly of course and will do all they can
make sure 3______
that I get a good education. They did not want me to
do 4___
any work at family; they want me to devote all my
time to 5______
my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.
We 6________
may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do
7______
not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks
8______
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they
9_____
really understand their own daughter? What things are in
10_____
other homes, I wonder.
NMET2003
When I first learned to write in English, I 1________
Ran into many difficulties. The main problem
Was in that I always thought in Chinese 2_______
And tried to translate anything into 3_______
English. My teacher advised me to keep my 4________
Diary. I followed her advice and should put 5_______
Down 100 words or so each day. Soon I
Began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as 6_______
I was learning to express me in simple 7_______
English. One day I wrote a little story and
Showed to my teacher. She liked it very 8_______
Much and reads it to the class. All said the 9______
Story was a good one. Their word were a 10________
great encouragement to me
命题特点
• 1、以记叙文为主；
• 2、错误类型设置相对稳定，错词占
6行，正确占1行，多词和缺词共占3
行；
• 3、重点考查动词时态、语态、非谓
语形式、动词词义辨析，兼顾名词、
介词、代词、冠词、形容、副词、
连词，还涉及到句型结构、行文逻
辑和固定（习惯）搭配等方面的错
误。
错误类型统计表
年份
错词
多词
缺词
正确
NMET
1999
2000
6
2
1
1
6
2
1
1
2001
6
2
1
1
2002
5
2
2
1
2003
6
2
1
1
测试点统计表
动词 非 名 连
时态 谓 词 接
语
词
1999
2000
1
2
2
2001
1
1
2002
2
2003
2
1
1
3
2
2
1
1
1
形
容
词
副
词
代
词
冠
词
介
词
2
1
1
1
1
1
2
1
1
1
1
2
3
1
1
1
1
解题思路
• 1. 动词的考查.
谓语动词主要考查时态, 语态, 主谓
一致; 非谓语动词主要考查不定式,
分词和动名词的使用及前后一致关
系.
解题思路: 根据上下文判断.
eg. (1) They did not want me to do any
work at home; they want me to devote all
my time to my studies…(NMET2001)
They did not want me to do any work
at home; they want me to devote all my
time to my studies… do
(2)Anyone may borrow books, and it cost
nothing to borrow them. (NMET94)
Anyone may borrow books, and it cost
nothing to borrow them. costs
(3) My parents love me dearly of course
and will do all they can make sure that I
get a good education. (NMET2001)
My parents love me dearly of course and
will do all they can to make sure that I
get a good education.
(4) Play football not only makes us grow up
tall and strong… (NMET98)
Play football not only makes us grow up
tall and strong…Playing
2. 名词的考查
• 考查名词的数.
• 解题思路: 句中名词该用单数还是复
数.
eg. …my studies so that I’ll get good
marks in all my subject. (NMET200
…my studies so that I’ll get good
marks in all my subject. subjects
3. 代词的考查
• 考查人称代词的格, 指代及关系代词
与从句关系.
• 解题思路:
•
a.人称代词的格是否误用;
b. 代词前后指代是否一致;
c. 定语从句中关系词是否误用.
eg. …we arrived at the foot of the
mountain. The three of them were
very excited. As we climbed the
mountain…(NMET2002)
…we arrived at the foot of the
mountain. The three of them were
very excited. As we climbed the
mountain… us
4. 形容词和副词
• 考查词法.
• 解题思路:判断句中形容词和副词是否混
淆使用以及比较级最高级是否正确.
eg. (1) …generally live much more longer
than people… (NMET93)
more 去掉
(2) Unfortunate, there are too many people
in my family. (NMET99)
Unfortunate, there are too many people in
my family. Unfortunately
5. 连词的考查
• 考查句法.
• 解题思路: 判断句中并列连词,从属连词
是否误用,多用或少用.
eg. (1) It looks as if my parents treat me as
a visitor and a guest. Do they really
understand their own daughter?
(NMET2001)
It looks as if my parents treat me as a
visitor and a guest. Do they really
understand their own daughter? or
(2) It was about noon we arrived
at the foot of the mountain.
(NMET2002)
It was about noon when we
arrived at the foot of the
mountain.
6. 介词的考查
• 考查惯用法.
• 解题思路: a. 注意介词词组的一些搭配;
b. 惯用法中介词是否误用,多用或少用.
Eg. …not seem to get much time to talk
about together. (NMET2001)
…not seem to get much time to talk about
together. 去掉about
7. 冠词的考查
• 考查冠词的用法.
• 解题思路:
• a. 抽象名词, 物质名词泛指时是否多
用了冠词;
• b. 名词前是否缺冠词;
• c. 定冠词和不定冠词是否混淆使用.
eg. (1) We may be one family and live
under a same roof… (NMET2001)
We may be one family and live under a
same roof… the
(2) Each player must obey captain, who is
the leader of the team. (NMET98)
Each player must obey the captain,
who is the leader of the team.
估计考生可能出现的错误
• 1. 重视句法中关系词、连词的误用.
• …but it didn’t matter that I would win or
not. whether (NMET2000)
• 2. 重视行文逻辑错误.
• He is a kind-hearted man and he will
refuse to help you.
• … he will not refuse to …
• 3. 重视英语句与句的连接必须使用
并列或从属连词这一特性.
• However, there are still some
countries there people have shorter
lives. Where
• 4. 重视重复问题及多词现象, 主要由
逐字翻译造成.
• It was my first time visit to an
American family. 去掉time
• 5. 重视固定搭配.
• Now I can’t watch television but a
few years ago, I was used to watch it
every night. 去掉was
• 6. 重视缺be动词的问题.
• They eager to know everything
about… (NMET96)
• They are eager to know everything
about…
解题步骤与方法
• 一、通读全文, 掌握大意;
• 二、整句理解, 逐行推敲;
• 三、复读全文, 检查核对.