Transcript types of evidence and sentences
What does a writer use to develop & Explain the topic?
In order to thoroughly develop and explain the topic, a writer must use EVIDENCE.
Evidence used in expository writing comes in several forms.
We will focus on: – Logical Evidence – Empirical Evidence – – Anecdotal Evidence Testimonial Evidence
What is logical evidence?
Logical evidence, simply put, refers to
FACTS
.
When a writer uses facts to develop an expository essay and to support their thesis statement, the writer is using LOGICAL EVIDENCE.
Logical evidence is convincing
for the reader/audience because a fact is something that can be
verified
,
something real or actual
.
Example: “In 2008, 7.3 million people died of heart disease.”
What is empirical evidence?
Empirical evidence is evidence that can be
experienced
or
observed
.
Scientific research
is considered empirical evidence. Example: “The sun will rise tomorrow.” (We know this to be true because we have seen the sun rise every day.) Example: reading the temperature on a thermometer (It will say the same thing no matter who is looking at it.)
What is anecdotal evidence?
Anecdotal evidence consists of an anecdote or a
descriptive story about an event or experience
. Another name for this type of evidence is a
testimonial
.
We
are all familiar with this kind of evidence and commonly
use it in everyday decision making
. For example, when choosing a babysitter or dentist, we would often ask for the experiences of friends and family.
Anecdotal evidence falls short of
what is necessary for a reasonable standard of
proof
. Example: “During last week’s lockdown, I heard a student was arrested for smoking in the bathroom.”
Testimonial evidence
Testimonial evidence
is given by an
expert or authority
in a particular field (a doctor, lawyer, police officer, etc.) Differs from anecdotal evidence in that the evidence is almost always considered to be
credible
.
Example: “Doctors say that eating candy is bad for your health.” Example: “Police say that the robbers were armed and wearing masks.”
Figurative Language, Rhetorical Devices, & Syntax
Appositive
An appositive is a noun or pronoun — often with modifiers — set beside another noun or pronoun to explain or identify it. Here are some examples of appositives (the
noun or pronoun will be in blue
, the
appositive will be in red
).
-Your
friend Bill
is in trouble.
-My brother's
car
,
a sporty red convertible with bucket seats
, is the envy of my friends.
-
The first state to ratify the U. S. Constitution
,
Delaware
rich in history.
is
Anaphora
a rhetorical term for the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses or verses.
– “
It was
the best of times,
it was
the worst of times,
it was
the age of wisdom,
it was
the age of foolishness,
it was
the epoch of belief,
it was
the epoch of incredulity,
it was
the season of Light,
it was
the season of Darkness,
it was
the spring of hope,
it was
the winter of despair.”
Allusion
an expression designed to call something to mind without mentioning it explicitly; an indirect or passing reference.
“We are also Matthew, Mark, Luke, and John.” “I am no Prince Hamlet.”
Figurative Language
Metaphor: a figure of speech which compares two things without using “like” or “as” – Our house is our nest – My love is a deep ocean Simile: a figure of speech which compares two things using “like” or “as” – Our house is LIKE a nest – My love is AS deep as an ocean
Figurative Language
Extended Metaphor: a metaphor that draws the comparison out and compares the two things at length and in many ways – Our home is our nest, we fly away only to return to its snug protection. Personification: figure of speech in which an object, animal or idea is given human characteristics – – Our house wraps our family in its warm embrace.
The dog laughed and the bears sang.
Onomatopoeia
the creation of words that imitate natural sounds – Buzz, murmur, hiss, bang, boom
Rhetorical Fragment
A rhetorical fragment is an incomplete sentence. It is used to evoke some emotional response from the readers.
– "See, a marriage needs love.
And God
.
And a little money
. That's all. The rest you can deal with.” – He knew it was not enough.
Not enough.
Metonymy Synecdoche
A figure of speech in which one word or phrase is substituted for another with which it is closely associated.
-
England
decides to keep check on immigration. -
The suits
were at meeting.
-
Pen
is mightier than
sword
. -Let me give you a
hand
. a figure of speech in which a term for a part of something refers to the whole of something, or vice versa.
Any example of synecdoche is also an example of metonymy, but only some examples of metonymy are synecdoche.
– Part to represent whole: – Whole to represent part: At the Olympics, you will hear that the United States won a gold medal in an event. That actually means a
team
from the United States, not the country as a whole.
Asyndeton v. Polysyndeton
Asyndeton Polysyndeton
the omission of conjunctions “He has provided the poor with jobs, with opportunity, with self respect.” “I came, I saw, I conquered.” a list or series of words, phrases, or clauses that is connected with the repeated use of the same conjunction.
“We lived
and
loved
and
left.” laughed
and
“
Nor
will it be finished in the first one thousand days;
nor
the life of this Administration; in
nor
even perhaps in our lifetime on this planet.”
Epistrophe
repetition of a word or expression at the end of successive phrases, clauses, sentences, or verses especially for rhetorical or poetic effect – – “of the people, by the people, for the people” “When I was a child, I spoke as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child.”
Figurative Language
Hyperbole: figure of speech in which the truth is exaggerated for emphasis – – Our house means more to us than all the money in the world I’m so happy I’m just going to die
Loose/Cumulative Sentence Structure
• An independent clause followed by a series of subordinate constructions (phrases or clauses) that gather details about a person, place, event, or idea.
–
I found a large hall, obviously a former garage, dimly lit, and packed with cots.
–
I knew I had found a friend in the woman, who herself was a lonely soul, never having known the love of man or child.
Periodic Sentence
A long and frequently involved sentence, marked by suspended syntax, in which the sense is not completed until the final word--usually with an emphatic climax.
– – "In the almost incredibly brief time which it took the small but sturdy porter to roll a milk-can across the platform and bump it, with a clang, against other milk-cans similarly treated a moment before, Ashe fell in love.“ "To believe your own thought, to believe that what is true for you in your private heart is true for all men, that is genius."
Active v. Passive Voice
In an active sentence, the subject is doing the action. – – "Steve loves Amy." (Steve is the subject, and he is doing the action: he loves Amy, the object of the sentence.) “I Heard It through the Grapevine.” ("I" is the subject, the one who is doing the action. "I" is hearing "it," the object of the sentence.)
Active v. Passive Voice
In passive voice, the target of the action gets promoted to the subject position. – – "Amy is loved by Steve." (The subject of the sentence becomes Amy, but she isn't doing anything. Rather, she is just the recipient of Steve's love. The focus of the sentence has changed from Steve to Amy.) “It was heard by me through the grapevine” (not such a catchy title anymore.)
Jargon Colloquialism
special words or expressions that are used by a particular profession or group and are difficult for others to understand – – Touchdown, territory, scrambling, loose ball, kickoff, man-in-motion, down, end zone, goal line, hand-off, offside, picked off, recovery, audible, blitz, clipping, down . “on cloud nine,” “sweet tooth,” “poker face,” “back burner” a word or phrase that is not formal or literary, typically one used in ordinary or familiar conversation.
– “Hallelujah holla back.” –Barack Obama “Y’all”, “gonna”, “wanna”
Inverted Syntax
Sentence structure in which the expected order of words is reversed Sometimes this is found in older poems because authors would reverse word order to conform to meter and rhyme scheme however people did not speak this way in everyday language
Inverted Syntax
From the flames I ran away
I ran away from the flames
My words on deaf ears fell
My words fell on deaf ears
Indifference, then, is not only a sin, it is a punishment.
Then, indifference is not only a sin, it is a punishment.
Parallel Structure
Parallel structure means using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance.
-Mary likes
to hike
, -Mary likes to
hike
,
to swim
, and
swim
, and
to ride ride
a bicycle.
a bicycle.
-Mary like hiking, swimming, and riding a bicycle.
DO NOT mix forms: – – Mary likes hik
ing
, swimm
ing
, and
to ride
a bicycle.
The coach told the players
that they should get
a lot of sleep,
that they should not eat
game.
too much, and
to do
some warm-up exercises before the
Situational Irony
Irony involving a situation in which actions have an effect that is opposite from what was intended.
- A man takes a back road to avoid traffic on the highway, and a wreck end up keeping him in stopped traffic for an hour.