Transcript A Funfair Mystery

Going to the Funfair
By Rohan Dronsfield
and
Hannah Bahmed
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Chapter 1
To the fair
One bright, sunny, summers day
Rohan, Louise, Ella and Hannah
were playing lots of games
outside. Ella just took a old game
that Louise’s Dad had when he
was young. Suddenly out popped
a advert for a funfair that was
open every weekend. It said,
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Rodney’s Flash Funfair
Lots of enormous, fun rides!
Tuck in, brilliant restaurant provided
£2.00 per child
£3.00 per adult
Family price £5.00
9:00am until 10:00pm
They got so exited!!! They all rushed to their Mum and
screamed, “Mum!!! Mum!!! There is a funfair every
weekend! Can we go? Can we go? We hardly ever go
out. ”
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“Well. . .It is treat day, so yes!”
exclaimed Mum. They knew
nothing about the danger that
lie ahead . . . . . . . . . .
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Chapter 2
The Rides!
They went on loads of fun rides
like the wet, enormous water
slide. Mum even allowed them to
have popping popcorn and sticky
candyfloss! There was only one
of the rides left to experience. . .
They got really suspicious about
the ride because it was always
closed.
“Gee, I wonder why the ride is
so gloomy and dusty! It looks
like a rusty, broken down,
greyish, brown ghost ride. Do you
think that anybody has ever been
in that ride because it looks so
horrible?!” asked Ella
They all thought no one was in
there.
So they went in . . . . . . . . . . .
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Chapter 3
Going in
There was loads of shiny
cobwebs that glowed in
the darkness. A small
light beam, beamed in the
gigantic room.
Suddenly they heard
clinking and clanking
noises in the basement.
They went down some
grey, creaking staircase.
Louise felt a cold shiver
down her spine.
At the bottom of the ride
they spotted a funny
looking man who had
frizzy, white hair and he
was controlling lots of
bubbling chemicals.
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He was wearing
a small, white,
glowing
laboratory
cloak. It was so
small that he
was scrunched
up.
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“Look at all that equipment and it looks
like he’s making diamonds and, they're
fake!!!”
At that moment, the man turned
round to check one of his bubbling
chemicals but instead he saw the children.
His face was like an erupting volcano! His
eyes were wide as a anacondas mouth and
as red as lava. His mouth was like a
fearsome mouth with very sharp teeth. His
nose had boils and a wart at the end of it.
And the chase was on!!!
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Chapter 4
The chase is on!
They ran and ran, zooming upstairs
and smashed lots of chemicals. They
crawled into the kitchen and had a
plan. They put a bag of slime and put
it on top of the door. So they did it. At
that moment the man came in and
SPLAT!!!
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They rushed to their Mum and told
her to call the police.
So she told them, “Police! Police!
There’s an evil mad man (with gung
on his head), in the rides, the one
that’s always closed!!! At the
Funfair!”
So suddenly the police car skidded
round the bend and made a loud,
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!!!SREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECH!!!
Chapter 5
Caught Red Handed
They told them the whole story from
going into the ride to meeting the
man, seeing the fake diamond's to
putting the gung on his head.
Rohan, Ella, Joe and Louise were so
bored they even tried to go on more
rides but Mum said, “NO! This place
is dangerous, TOO DANGEROUS!!!!!!”
So the police came and arrested the
mad man and he shouted, “I’ll be
back!”
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